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Driving licence exam I am learning car driven now.Last time i lose this exam.I fircely want to got it.Honestly i have not got enough chance to practise.So i need concentrated on every driving experience.When driving car,just think how to drive it stablely and skillfully.I need insist on learning and trying.There is no harder thing if u have the courage and action to pass it.I really need it.The friends around me all have driving licence now.I don't want to fall behind them.If i got one,i can travel more places and it is very convenient.The consquence is important but i have to enjoy the process with my heart.Be the one you want to be,and do the thing you eant to do.Though lots of times you can't success,you have already tried your best .And then you don't have to regreit and shame for the failure.Haha!

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Driving licence exam

I am learning car driven now.Last time i lose this exam.I fircely want to got it.Honestly i have not got enough chance to practise.So i need concentrated on every driving experience.When driving car,just think how to drive it stablely and skillfully.I need insist on learning and trying.There is no harder thing if u have the courage and action to pass it.I really need it.The friends around me all have driving licence now.I don't want to fall behind them.If i got one,i can travel more places and it is very convenient.The consquence is important but i have to enjoy the process with my heart.Be the one you want to be,and do the thing you eant to do.Though lots of times you can't success,you have already tried your best .And then you don't have to regreit and shame for the failure.Haha!


I am learning to drive.  I failed the exam the last time.  I really want to pass! Honestly, I have not had enough practice, so I need to get more experience.  When I am driving, I concentrate on driving well. I need to persevere. It will be easy to pass, if I have the courage and enough practice. My friends all have licences and I want one too.  When I get mine I will be able to travel to more places. Passing is important, but I also have to enjoy it. My motto is "Be who you want to be, and do the things you want to do." Even if you don't succeed you know that you have tried your best.  Then there will be no regret and shame about failing.

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Driving licence exam

I am learning car driven now.Last time i lose this exam.I fircely want to got it.Honestly i have not got enough chance to practise.So i need concentrated on every driving experience.When driving car,just think how to drive it stablely and skillfully.I need insist on learning and trying.There is no harder thing if u have the courage and action to pass it (This doesn't make sense). I really need it.The friends around me all have driving licence now.I don't want to fall behind them.If i got one,i can travel more places and it is very convenient.The consquence is important but i have to enjoy the process with my heart ( Don't understand what you mean here) Be the one you want to be,and do the thing you eant to do.Though lots of times you can't success,you have already tried your best .And then you don't have to regreit and shame for the failure.Haha!


You have quite a lot of mistakes so I rewrote it. You also have trouble using the right verbs and verb tenses and also sentence structure.

I am learning to drive a car now. Last time I failed the exam. I really want to get it. Honestly, I don't have enough chances to practice, so I need to concentrate on every driving experience. When I drive a car, I just think on how to drive it properly. I insist on learning and on trying. I really need it. Friends around me all have driving licences now and I don't want to fall behind them. If I had one, then I can travel to more places and it would be more convenient. Be the person you want to be, and do the thing you were born to do. Though there are times were you won't succeed, at least you have tried your best, and then you won't be regretful and feel ashamed of the failure.  

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