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I was lied to
The doctor lied to me = I was lied to.Recently, I went to see a doctor for treating about my backache, and he gave me a shot in my hip!!!
Before he gave it to me, I asked him before I was given it, "Is if it would be painful ??" and he answered , " yes, but only for the first a few seconds."
In a written conversation, we use a new paragraph for each new speaker. I've changed the sentence to reported speech, because that's more economical.
Actually, he had lied.
It was the hardest one I have ever got!
I was screaming during the whole injection!
Good effort! Shot is a bit colloquial, so we also use injection.
I know I've given you some upper-level grammar, but this is what we naturally use. Your original text is understandable, of course. :)
I was lied
I went to see a doctor for treating my backache, and he gave me a shot in my hip!!!I asked him before I was given it, "Is it painful??" And he answered, " Yes. But only for the first few seconds."
Actually, he lied.
It was the most painful one I have have ever gotten!
I was screaming while I was given the shot!
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