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I was lied I went to see a doctor for treating my backache, and he gave me a shot on my hip!!! I asked him before I was given it, "Is it painful??" And he answered, " Yes. But only first a few seconds." Actually, he lied. It was the hardest one I have ever got! I was screaming while the shot!

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I was lied to

The doctor lied to me = I was lied to.


Recently, I went to see a doctor for treating about my backache, and he gave me a shot in my hip!!!
Before he gave it to me, I asked him before I was given it, "Is if it would be painful ??" and he answered , " yes, but only for the first a few seconds."

In a written conversation, we use a new paragraph for each new speaker. I've changed the sentence to reported speech, because that's more economical.


Actually, he had lied.

It was the hardest one I have ever got!
I was screaming during the whole injection!

Good effort! Shot is a bit colloquial, so we also use injection.

I know I've given you some upper-level grammar, but this is what we naturally use. Your original text is understandable, of course. :)

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I was lied

I went to see a doctor for treating my backache, and he gave me a shot in my hip!!!
I asked him before I was given it, "Is it painful??" And he answered, " Yes. But only for the first few seconds."

Actually, he lied.

It was the most painful one I have have ever gotten!
I was screaming while I was given the shot!
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Thank you very much! I'll practice more!
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Very good! I only made a few corrections.

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