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An unusual but unforgettable day Today I feel very happy. In the morning, I chatted with my foreign friend Tanveer. He is from Pakistan, but now he is in Shanghai, China. He is a nice big brother for me. It's happy to chat with him. In the noon, I made two fried eggs, two dumplings, and a bowl of rice. That sounds delicious, right? In the afternoon, I went shopping by myself. I bought some new clothes. Then my mother's friend went to see us. We ate dinner together. Soon the evening was coming. We had to go home and say goodbye to aunt Chen! When I arrived at home, I chatted with an UK friend on HelloTalk. Now I am going to write my essay. In a word, today is an unusual but unforgettable day. Hope tomorrow will be more beautiful and happy!

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An unusual but unforgettable day

Today I feel very happy. In the morning, I chatted with my foreign friend Tanveer. He is from Pakistan, but now he is in Shanghai, China. He is a nice big brother for me. It's happy to chat with him.
In the noon, I made two fried eggs, two dumplings, and a bowl of rice. That sounds delicious, right? In the afternoon, I went shopping by myself. I bought some new clothes.
Then my mather's friend went to see us. Then my mother's friend came to see us. We ate dinner together. Soon the evening was coming. We had to go home and say goodbye to aunt Chen!
When I arrived at home, I chatted with an UK friend on HelloTalk. Now I am going to write my essay. In a word, today is an unusual but unforgettable day.
Hope tomorrow will be more beautiful and happy!
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Please help me check this essay. Thank you!

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