My trip to Japan I went to Japan this summer holiday.I went there with my mother ,my grandpa ,my aunt and my cousins. We went to Kyoto and Nara this time.Kyoto is an old city,there are a lot of tradit

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My trip to Japan I went to Japan this summer holiday.I went there with my mother ,my grandpa ,my aunt and my cousins. We went to Kyoto and Nara this time.Kyoto is an old city,there are a lot of traditional houses and historical sites.Hot spring is a famous activity to do in Japan.In the Kyoto aquarium, we saw penguin walking in front of us,dolphins singing and penguins on the penguin skywalk.Nara is famous because of the deer.They walk around in the central park,some of them even crossed the road and ran into the museum. This is my trip to Japan I think it is amazing.

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My trip to Japan

I went to Japan this during my summer holiday. I went there with my mother , my grandpa , my aunt and my cousins.
We went to Kyoto and Nara this time. Kyoto is an old city, so there are a lot of traditional houses and historical sites. Hot Visiting the hot springs is a famous activity to do in Japan. In the Kyoto Aquarium, we saw a penguin walking in front of us, dolphins singing and penguins on the penguin skywalk. Nara is famous because of the deer.They deer; they walk around in the central park,. Some of them even crossed the road and ran into the museum.
This is what happened on my trip to Japan. I think it is It was amazing!

Good job! I corrected ''aquarium' because it sounded like the name of the aquarium is 'Kyoto Aquarium'. That would make it a PROPER NOUN so it needs a capital. If this isn't the name of the aquarium it's better to say 'In an aquarium in Kyoto'. Good work :)

My trip to Japan

I went to Japan this summer holiday.I went there with my mother ,my grandpa ,my aunt and my cousins.
We went to Kyoto and Nara this time.Kyoto is an old city,there are a lot of traditional houses and historical sites.Going to hot springs is a famous activity to do in Japan.In the Kyoto aquarium, we saw a penguin walking in front of us,dolphins singing and penguins on the penguin skywalk.Nara is famous because of the deer.They walk around in the central park,some of them even cross the road and run into the museum.
This is my trip to Japan. I think it is amazing.

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