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something about me Hi, my name is Zayn and im born at Milan 07-11-1995, and I grew up in Milan. I studied until graduation and received his university studies in medicine. in 2012 I decided to move and go to live in another country that is Australia. Now I live alone and I try to improve my English, (if you want to know more just ask), thanks for your attention.

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something about me

Hi, my name is Zayn and im born at Milan 07-11-1995, and I grew up in Milan. I studied until graduation and received his university studies in medicine. in 2012 I decided to move and go to live in another country that is Australia. Now I live alone and I try to improve my English, (if you want to know more just ask), thanks for your attention.

1) This should be 'I was'. You are talking about an event that happened in the past, and so should use the past tense 'was', rather than the present tense 'am'. Also, the next part of your sentence is in the past tense, and a sentence should always stay in the same tense.

2) This should be 'my'. "His" is the third person possessive, and is used if the thing you are talking about belongs to a man or boy.

3) When you finish university you are given a 'degree'. SO this should be 'received my university degree in medicine'. When you talk about getting a degree you can also usually just say 'received my degree in medicine'. People will usually know what you are talking about.

4) This part of the sentence is just sounds a little bit off. It should be something like 'I decided to go an live in a another country, and I chose Australia.' or maybe "I decided to go and live in another country; I chose Australia.'

Other than those mistakes, very well done. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.

Arrivederci. 

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Something about me

Hi, my name is Zayn and I was born in Milan on July 7th, 1995. I grew up in Milan and I graduated with a degree in medicine. In 2012, I decided to move and live in Australia. Now, I live alone and I'm trying to improve my English. By the way, if you want to know more, just ask. Thank you for your attention.

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