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10 sentences. Can you help me with my writing please. Can you explain my mistakes? Thanks How are things going? What's the weather like? Here, we are having a heatwave. It's unbearable hot in the daytime but a bit cooler at night. Hope everything is going well. I am doing OK. My son is growing little by little. He is still very demanding and I can even say he has become more demanding since now he can roll and after he rolls on his belly he starts to whine. On the whole, he's a placid quite boy and only cries when he can't go to sleep. My daughter is coming soon after her summer holidays near the seaside with my eldest sister and my nephews. I am looking forward to seeing her and counts days when she comes. I have little time on my English and since my son's birth I haven't learnt any new words. I am trying to read online news and to write something. Write back to me, please

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10 sentences. Can you help me with my writing please. Can you explain my mistakes? Thanks

How are things going? What's the weather like? Here, we are having a heatwave. It's unbearably hot in the daytime but a bit cooler at night.
Hope everything is going well. I am doing OK. My son is growing up little by little. He is still very demanding, and I can even say he has become more demanding, because now he can roll now, and after each time he rolls on his belly, he starts to whine. On the whole, he's a placid quiet boy and only cries whenever he can't go to sleep.
My daughter is coming to visit us soon, after her summer holidays near the seaside, with my eldest sister and my nephews . I am looking forward to seeing her and counting the days till her arrival.
I have little time for my English studies, and since my son's birth, I haven't learnt any new words. I am trying to read online news and to write something.
Write back to me, please.

Notes> unbearably is an adverb to modify the adjective "hot" . The heat is unbearable in the daytime( as an adjective)

My daughter is coming to visit us soon, after her summer holidays near the seaside, with my eldest sister and my nephews > Your daughter ,sister and nephews are coming.

My daughter is coming to visit us soon, after her summer holidays near the seaside with my eldest sister and my nephews > Only your daughter is coming.

My daughter is coming soon after her summer holidays near the seaside with my eldest sister and my nephews.> uncertain who are coming .

I am looking forward to seeing her and counting the days till her arrival.

> Looking ....+ ..counting > both continuous present tense.

Use "whenever" if an action is repeated , not one-off , which refer to a single event . I will tell him when I see him Ok ( the next time you see him) vs I will tell him whenever I see him ( every time you see him)

The rest are mostly comma placements that should be used. A simple guide : put a comma before "and"  if the following sentence is independent like the first sentence . I went there, and I saw him there  ( Independent) vs I went there and saw him there ( non independent)


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10 sentences. Can you help me with my writing please. Can you explain my mistakes? Thanks

How are things going? What's the weather like? Here, we are having a heatwave. It's unbearable hot in the daytime but a bit cooler at night.
Hope everything is going well. I am doing OK. My son is growing little by little. He is still very demanding and I could  say he has become more demanding. sometimes he is kind of a brat( vide brat possibly not that pejorative). On the whole, he's a quiet and cool boy and only cries when he can't  sleep. ( no need 2 verbs here)
My daughter is coming soon after her summer holidays ( vacations) near the seaside with my eldest sister and my nephews. I am looking forward to see ( no gerund ) her and i'm counting the day  for her arrival.
I have little time on my English practice  and since my son's birth I haven't learnt any new words. I am trying to read online news and write something.
Write back to me, please
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10 sentences. Can you help me with my writing please. Can you explain my mistakes? Thanks

How are things going? What's the weather like? Here, we are having a heatwave. It's unbearabley  hot in the daytime but a bit cooler at night.
*I* Hope everything is going well. I am doing OK. My son is growing little by little. He is still very demanding and I can even say he has become more demanding since now he can roll and after he rolls on his belly he starts to whine. On the whole, he's a placid quite quiet boy and only cries when he can't go to sleep.
My daughter is coming soon after *spending* her summer holidays near the seaside with my eldest sister and my nephews. I am looking forward to seeing her and counts  *counting down the* days when  until she comes.
I have little time *to spend* on my English and since my son's birth I haven't learnt any new words. I am trying to read online news and to write something.
Write back to me, please

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