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2016/8/25 Practicing 1. 我有一个姐姐、一个妹妹和一个弟弟。 I have an older sister, a younger sister and a younger brother. 2. 我希望我们可以为好朋友。 I hope we can/may be(come) good friends. 3. 他一个人会做。 He can do it by himself. 4. 今日她不在学校了。 She wasn't at school today. 5. 这个是我的爸爸的、那个是我的哥哥的。 This one is my dad's and that one is my older brother's. 6. 他们已经为好朋友了。 They have became/became good friends. 7. 他喜欢吃鸡。 He likes to eat chicken. 8. 你学习哪里? Where do you study? 9. 那里是我学习儿。 That's where I study. 10. 哪个男孩老师的男孩子? Which boy is the teacher's son? 11. 我今日学习二个言语(了)。 Today I studied two languages. 12. 我还正在工作。  I'm still working. 13. 我的目标是学习汉语。 My goal is to study Chinese.

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2016/8/25 Practicing

1. 我有一个姐姐、一个妹妹和一个弟弟。
I have an older sister, a younger sister and a younger brother.

2. 我希望我们可以成为好朋友。
I hope we can/may be(come) good friends.

3. 他一个人会做。
He can do it by himself.

4. 今日她不在学校了。
She wasn't at school today.

5. 这个是我的爸爸的、那个是我的哥哥的。
This one is my dad's and that one is my older brother's.

6. 他们已经成为好朋友了。
They have became/became good friends.

7. 他喜欢吃鸡。
He likes to eat chicken.

8. 你学习在哪里学习?
Where do you study?

9. 那里是我学习儿的地方。
That's where I study.

10. 哪个男孩是老师的儿子男孩子?
Which boy is the teacher's son?

11. 我今日学习二个言语(了)。
Today I studied two languages.

12. 我还正在工作。
 I'm still working.

13. 我的目标是学习汉语。
My goal is to study Chinese.
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2016/8/25 Practicing

1. 我有一个姐姐、一个妹妹和一个弟弟。
I have an older sister, a younger sister and a younger brother.

2. 我希望我们可以为好朋友。
I hope we can/may be(come) good friends.

3. 他一个人自己会做。
He can do it by himself.

4. 今日她不在学校了(this"了" means from now on)。
She wasn't at school today.

5. 这个是我的爸爸的、那个是我的哥哥的。
This one is my dad's and that one is my older brother's.

6. 他们已经为好朋友了。
They have became/became good friends.

7. 他喜欢吃鸡。
He likes to eat chicken.

8. 你学习哪里你在哪里学习?
Where do you study?

9. 那里是我学习儿我在那里学习。
That's where I study.

10. 哪个男孩老师的男孩子哪个男孩是老师的儿子?
Which boy is the teacher's son?

11. 我今日学习二个言语(了)。“我今天学习了两种语言”is more natural
Today I studied two languages.

12. 我还正在工作。
 I'm still working.

13. 我的目标是学习汉语。
My goal is to study Chinese.
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2016/8/25 Practicing

1. 我有一个姐姐、,一个妹妹和一个弟弟。
I have an older sister, a younger sister and a younger brother.

2. 我希望我们可以成为好朋友。
I hope we can/may be(come) good friends.

3. 他一个人会做完成。
He can do it by himself.

4. 今日天,她不在学校了。
She wasn't at school today.

5. 这个是我的爸爸的、,那个是我的哥哥的。
This one is my dad's and that one is my older brother's.

6. 他们已经为好朋友了。
They have became/became good friends.

7. 他喜欢吃鸡。
He likes to eat chicken.

8. 你学习哪里在哪里学习?
Where do you study?

9. 那里是我学习儿我在那里学习。
That's where I study.

10. 哪个男孩是老师的男孩子儿子?
Which boy is the teacher's son?

11. 我今日学习二个两种言语语言(了)。
Today I studied two languages.

12. 我还正在工作。
 I'm still working.

13. 我的目标是学习汉语。
My goal is to study Chinese.
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2016/8/25 Practicing

1. 我有一个姐姐、一个妹妹和一个弟弟。
I have an older sister, a younger sister and a younger brother.

2. 我希望我们可以为好朋友。
I hope we can/may be(come) good friends.

3. 他一个人会做。
He can do it by himself.

4. 今日她不在学校了。
She wasn't at school today.

5. 这个是我的爸爸的、那个是我的哥哥的。
This one is my dad's and that one is my older brother's.

6. 他们已经为好朋友了。
They have became/became good friends.

7. 他喜欢吃鸡。
He likes to eat chicken.

8. 你学习哪里?
Where do you study?

9. 那里是我学习儿。
That's where I study.

10. 哪个男孩是老师的儿子?
Which boy is the teacher's son?

11. 我今日学习二个言语(了)。
Today I studied two languages.

12. 我还正在工作。
 I'm still working.

13. 我的目标是学习汉语。
My goal is to study Chinese.
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2016/8/25 Practicing

1. 我有一个姐姐、一个妹妹和一个弟弟。
I have an older sister, a younger sister and a younger brother.

2. 我希望我们能够成为好朋友。(normal)
I hope we can/may be(come) good friends.

3. 他能独立完成。(normal)他一个人就行。(abnormal)
He can do it by himself.

4. 今天她不在学校。
She wasn't at school today.

5. 这位是我的爸爸,那位是我的哥哥。(two sentences can not use“、”      “、”is used for dividing phrases or nouns)(normal)

     这是我爸爸,那是我哥哥。(abnormal)
This one is my dad's and that one is my older brother's.

6. 他们已经为好朋友了。
They have became/became good friends.

7. 他喜欢吃鸡。
He likes to eat chicken.

8. 你在哪( 儿)学习?
Where do you study?

9. 我在那(儿)学习。


那是我学习的地儿。(地儿 equals to 地方,and means a place ) 

That's where I study.

10. 哪个男孩是老师的孩子? (normal)

哪个是老师的儿子(abnormal)
Which boy is the teacher's son?

11. 我今天学习了两个语言。people don't say 二个,they say两个

Today I studied two languages.

12. 我还正在工作。
 I'm still working.

13. 我的目标是学习汉语。
My goal is to study Chinese.



when you chat with others, i recommend you to speak more abnormal sentences.it's more clear and people will think you are a good chinese speaker.

Chinese people seldom say“今日” when they chat with each other,they prefer to saying "今天"

ok,that is all.your Chinese  is pretty good ,that is my first time to edit other's article,maybe i am too strict .


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