Are there any mistakes? The man seemed to be happy. And I knew that I was not alone finding that surprising because I saw a girl that was also staring at him. After she glanced at me. That seemed sur

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Are there any mistakes? The man seemed to be happy. And I knew that I was not alone finding that surprising because I saw a girl that was also staring at him. After she glanced at me. That seemed surprising is that it was early the morning, on the way to work, and even though it was raining a lot, this guy didn't have an umbrella to protect him. So his suit was completely soaked but this guy was still going to work with a very big smile.

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Are there any mistakes?

The man seemed to be happy. And I knew that I was not ~~alone finding that~~ the only one that found it surprising because I saw a girl that was also staring at him. After she glanced at me.

~~That~~ What seemed surprising is that it was early the morning, on the way to work, and even though it was raining a lot, this guy didn't have an umbrella to protect him. So his suit was completely soaked but this guy (more natural to say "he" inststead of "this guy") was still going to work with a very big smile.

There are mistakes, but I think the issue in this piece is really about how you present the information, the flow of things. Also, this may be the reason why your tenses are mixed up, i.e. "seemed surprising" and "going to work."

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