Letter
9 Campoamor Street,
La Solana,
Ciudad Real,
13240
5th October 2016
Romer School,
Birds Streets,
La Solana.
Dear editor,
I'm writing to explain my favourite local custom which is The King's Night. I hope my letter will be published in the magazine.
The King's Night is celebrated the 6th of January. It's a night which Melchior, Caspar and Balthazar, who are the Three Kings, leave presents in every house, especially for the children. Children should be good because of if they were bad, the Three Kings would give them coal. But this is the legend. Really, the Three Kings arte the parents and they are so good with their children.
In my house this day is very amazing due to everybody having a very good gift. Last year, muy mum gave me a present which was a laptop. I'd never been so exciting!
To conclude, I'd like to explain it's my favourtie custom because of this day being more happy and everybody is nervous to know what would be his gift.
Best wishes
Laura
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Letter
9 Campoamor Street,La Solana,
Ciudad Real,
13240
5th October 2016
Romer School,
Birds Streets,
La Solana.
Dear editor,
I'm writing to explain my favourite local custom which is The King's Night. I hope my letter will be published in the magazine.
The King's Night is celebrated the 6th of January. It is a night in which Melchior, Caspar and Balthazar, who are the Three Kings, leave presents in every house, especially for the children. Children should be good because if they were to behave badly, the Three Kings would give them coal. However, this is just a legend. Really, the Three Kings are the children's parents and they spoil their children.
In my house, this day is amazing due to everybody receiving very nice gifts. Last year, my mum gave me a laptop. I'd never been so excited!
To conclude, I'd like to explain that it is my favourite custom because this day is filled with happiness and everybody is nervous to know what gift they will receive.
Best wishes
Laura
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Letter
9 Campoamor Street,La Solana,
Ciudad Real,
13240
5th October 2016
Romer School,
Birds Streets,
La Solana.
Dear Editor,
I'm writing to explain my favourite local custom which is The King's Night. I hope my letter will be published in the magazine.
The King's Night is celebrated *on* the 6th of January. It's a night *in* which Melchior, Caspar and Balthazar, who are the Three Kings, leave presents in every house, especially for the children. Children should be good because of if they were bad, the Three Kings would give them coal. But this is the legend. Really, the Three Kings arte the parents and they are so good with their children.
In my house this day is very amazing due to everybody having a getting very good gift*s*. Last year, muy mum gave me a present which was a laptop. I'd never been so exciting! excited.
To conclude, I'd like to explain it's my favourite custom because of this day being more so happy and everybody is nervous excited to know what would be his gift *he will receive*.
Best wishes
Laura
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