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Shoes Problem (1) In the morning I was heading for the nearest station from my house. It usually takes approximately 15 minutes on foot. When I got close to the station, a sole came off the bottom of my left shoes all of sudden! There was no way to fix it. So, I picked it up from the road and put it into my briefcase. Although I usually put on brown leather shoes, I choose black shoes out of three pairs of black shoes by chance. It seems that the choice brought me the unpleasant situation. It was weird to walk with uneven pairs of shoes. I actually tried to walk naturally as if I wore normal shoes without any problem. However, it was hard and didn't work well. I'm sure people around me easily realized my dumb situation. Anyway, I got on a commuting train and opened a book. I said to myself, "Don't think about it too much. That’s nothing. All the people around me are a stranger to me. I don't need to embarrass myself." The title of the book was "1Q84" written by Haruki Murakami, one of my favorite novel authors. I tried to focus on reading it and succeeded in the attempt somehow. I was in the story for around an hour. (to be continued)

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Shoes Problem (1)

In the morning I was heading for out to the nearest station from my house. It usually takes approximately 15 minutes on foot.

When I got close to the station, all of a sudden a the sole came off the bottom of my left shoes all of sudden! There was no way to fix it. So, I picked it up from off  the road and put it into my briefcase.

Although I usually put on wear brown leather shoes, I choose black shoes instead. out of three pairs of black shoes by chance. It seems that making that the choice brought led me the unpleasant situation.

It was weird to walk with uneven pairs of shoes. I actually tried to walk naturally as if I wore normal shoes without any problems. However, it was hard and didn't work well. I'm sure people around me easily realized my dumb situation predicament.

Anyway, I got on a commuting commuter train and opened a book. I said to myself, "Don't think about it too much. That’s It's nothing. All the people around me are a strangers to me. I don't need to embarrass myself."

The title of the book was "1Q84" written by Haruki Murakami, one of my favorite novel authors. I tried to focus on reading it and succeeded in the attempt somehow. I was in the story for around an hour. and read for about an hour.
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Shoes Problem (1)

In the morning I was heading for the nearest station to my house. It usually takes approximately 15 minutes on foot.

When I got close to the station, a sole came off the bottom of my left shoe all of sudden! There was no way to fix it. So, I picked it up off the road and put it into my briefcase.

Although I usually put on (or wear) brown leather shoes, I chose black shoes out of three pairs of black shoes by chance. It seems that the choice led me to this unpleasant situation.

It was weird to walk with uneven pairs of shoes. I actually tried to walk naturally as if I wore normal shoes without any problem. However, it was hard and didn't work well. I'm sure people around me easily realized my stupid situation.

Anyway, I got on a commuting train (I don't think there is a real expression for this) and opened a book. I said to myself, "Don't think about it too much. It's nothing. All the people around me (or everyone) were strangers to me. There is no need for me to be embarrassed.

The title of the book was "1Q84" written by Haruki Murakami, one of my favorite novel authors. I tried to focus on reading it and succeeded in the attempt somehow. I was in the story for around an hour. (this isn't said in English- maybe-i was reading it for around half an hour- or i was really into the story for an hour).


WELL done! You have a strong level just i made it sound more native. Good luck :)



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