Trip in singapore
Have you ever been to singapore? I've have been twice , first time with my friends and ,second time with my parents.
Last few weeks we've have 3days holiday,so We decided to go outside Thailand .. Yes it's singapore !
First we landed to Changi airport at night and had a good night sleep at lavender hotel. The hotel is very near from the MRT and has lots of nice cafe nearby.
Second day, we had breakfast at china town and sightseeing around. Then we went to sentosa. The weather was nice not too hot like my country. I'm very impressed to singapore's MRT. It's so good and cheap.
Last day we went to pray at Kwaun im temple. This temple is very famous. Lots of chinese went there even Thai too. I prayed for my study as well.
I love travelling , like seeing how the people like how the world like. Singapore is cosmopolitan country chinese ,hindu, islam people etc can live together. All the cultures are interesting.if I've asked to visit SG again, the answer will be yes.^^
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Trip in singapore
Have you ever been to singapore? I've have been twice , *the* first time with my friends and *the* second time with my parents.*Over the* last few weeks we've have 3days holiday,so We decided to go outside Thailand .. Yes
First we landed
*On the* second day, we had breakfast at China Town and *went* sightseeing around *the area*. Then we went to sentosa. The weather was nice not too hot like my country. I'm very impressed
*On the* last day we went to pray at Kwaun im temple. This temple is very famous. Lots of chinese went there even Thais too. I prayed for my study as well.
I love travelling , like seeing how the people
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Trip in Singapore
Have you ever been to Singapore? I've have been twice, first time with my friends and the second time with my parents.In these last few weeks, we've had a 3 day holiday, so we decided to go outside Thailand .. Yes it's Singapore !
First we landed in Changi airport at night and had a good nights sleep at lavender hotel. The hotel was very near from the MRT and has lots of nice cafes nearby. (Maybe good idea to explain what MRT is.)
Second day, we had breakfast in china town and went sightseeing around. Then we went to sentosa. The weather was nice not too hot like in my country. I was very impressed with Singapore's MRT. It was so good and cheap.
Last day we went to pray in Kwaun im temple. This temple is very famous. Lots of Chinese went there even Thai too. I prayed for my studies as well.
I love travelling, enjoy seeing how the people around the world are like. Singapore is cosmopolitan country Chinese ,Hindu, Islam people etc can live together. All the cultures are interesting. If I'm asked to visit SG again, the answer will be yes.^^
Nice eye opening read. Try to use past tense when talking about your past experiences :).
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Trip in singapore
Have you ever been to singapore? I've have been twice , first time with my friends and ,second time with my parents.Last few weeks we've have 3days holiday,so We decided to go outside Thailand .. Yes it's singapore !
First we landed to Changi airport at night and had a good night sleep at lavender hotel. The hotel is very near from the MRT and has lots of nice cafe nearby.
Second day, we had breakfast at china town and sightseeing around. Then we went to sentosa. The weather was nice not too hot like my country. I'm very impressed to singapore's MRT. It's so good and cheap.
Last day we went to pray at Kwaun im temple. This temple is very famous. Lots of chinese went there even Thai too. I prayed for my study as well.
I love travelling , *because I like seeing how different people see things. Singapore is cosmopolitan country chinese ,hindu, islam people etc can live together. All the cultures are interesting.if I've asked to visit SG again, the answer will be yes.^^
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No worries, Ploy.
I have now added a sentence to reflect that sort of meaning.
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Thank you so much for correcting my note. That sentence , I meant that I love to travel because it's give me the new perspective.
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