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Thinking My Life with Beer I just want to have a short time to think about something, so that's why I am here, at the end of the counter at my favorite beer bar. My lovely daughter is becoming 25 years old soon. I've been working hard to raise her and to do something good for my family. I know I'm getting old, however I still have a few things that I want to try. I feel it might be time to change the track and start something new, something amazing... A 53-years old man is thinking about his life with a pint of YOKOHAMA lager.

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Thinking About My Life with Beer

I just want to have a short time to think about something, so that's why I am here, at the end of the counter at my favorite beer bar.

My lovely daughter is becoming a 25 years old soon. I've been working hard to raise her and to do something good for my family. I know I'm getting old, however I still have a few things that I want to try. I feel it might be time to change the track and start something new, something amazing...
This 53 years old man is thinking about his life with a pint of YOKOHAMA lager.

Almost reads as an advert :) Hope you had some good realizations with your beer. What were they?

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Thinking About My Life with Beer

I just want to have a short time to think about something, so that's why I am here, at the end of the counter at my favorite beer bar.

My lovely daughter is becoming turning(1) 25 years old soon. I've been working hard to raise her and to do something good for my family. I know I'm getting old. However I still have a few things that I want to try. I feel that it might be time to change the track and start something new, something amazing...

A This 53 years old man is thinking about his life with a pint of YOKOHAMA lager.


(1) "becoming 25 years old soon" is not wrong, but I feel that it's more natural to say "turning 25 soon"

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Hello Laura. Thank you for your nice comment. I am happy to know you like my photo.
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It´s so great! A man is thinking about his life with a pint of YOKOHAMA lager, what a beautiful picture! Good wishes to you!
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「季」(とき）ですね。白州12年に山崎と知多をブレンドした新しいウィスキーですね。私はまだ飲んだことがありません。探してみます。

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