My day
Yesterday had a terrible dream, the original signal of luck today.The original is true.I have been unlucky today.First, work shoes are bad.Second, today's lunch is very terrible.Finally on to night.Need me to work overtime.In the end I cried.That's too bad.I think this happens, because I can't speak English.So I must study English hard.
昨天做了一个可怕的梦，原来预示着今天的运气。原来是真的。今天就一直倒霉。第一，上班的时候鞋子烂了。第二，今天的午餐非常难吃。终于坚持到晚上。居然需要我加班。最后我哭了。真是太难受了。我认为发生这种事情，是因为我不会英语。所以我一定要努力学习英语。
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My day
Yesterday had a terrible dream, the original signal of luck today.The original is true.I have been unlucky today.First, work shoes are bad.Second, today's lunch is very terrible.Finally on to night.Need me to work overtime.In the end I cried.That's too bad.I think this happens, because I can't speak English.So I must study English hard.昨天做了一个可怕的梦，原来预示着今天的运气。原来是真的。今天就一直倒霉。第一，上班的时候鞋子烂了。第二，今天的午餐非常难吃。终于坚持到晚上。居然需要我加班。最后我哭了。真是太难受了。我认为发生这种事情，是因为我不会英语。所以我一定要努力学习英语。
I had a terrible dream last night and it turned out to be a sign for a string of bad luck ( series of unfortunate events) that happened to me today. My shoes broke while i was at work , lunch turned out to be terrible and i ended up working overtime. In the end i felt overwhelmed and i cried. I think all these happened to me due to my incompetence in English hence i am now even more determined to work hard on improving my English
First time correcting, hope it's not too bad. Good Luck!
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