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Essay: Teenager should share housework equally Nowadays, almost every family have to share the housework because all the members of the family have their own responsabilities along the day. As a consequence, young people have to participate in mantaining the house clean, as well as their parents do it. It is true that teenagers spend many hours at school or practising extra activities such as extra school work, sports or learning music and, maybe, the do not have enough time to do the chores. Therefore, some people may think that the do not have to participate in the housechores because it is an exclusive parent´s duty. On the other hand, parents too have a strict timetable and they need help when they arrive at home. It is not fair that, for example, the mother of the family, who has her own job and responsabilities, does all the tasks at home. From my point of view, households must be shared and teenagers must have specific tasks. For example, easy tasks like cleaning, hoovering or washing the dishes. And it has significant advantages for them, because it prepares them for the future and they become more concious about real life.

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Essay: Teenagers should share housework equally

Nowadays, almost every family has to share the housework because all the members of the family have their own responsibilities during the day. As a consequence, young people have to participate in doing the house work, as well as their parents.

It is true that teenagers spend many hours at school or doing extra activities such as extra school work, sports or learning music and, maybe, they do not have enough time to do the chores. Therefore, some people may think that they do not have to contribute to doing the house work / chores because it is exclusively the parent´s duty.

On the other hand, parents too have a strict timetable and they need help when they get home. It is not fair that, for example, the mother, who has her own job and responsibilities, does all the house work.

From my point of view, household chores must be shared and teenagers must have specific tasks. For example, easy tasks like cleaning, hoovering or washing the dishes. And it has significant advantages for them, because it prepares them for the future and they become more conscious about real life.
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Essay: Teenager should share housework equally

Nowadays, almost every family have  to share the housework because all the members of the family have their own responsibilities along throughout the day. As a consequence (you could say, "As a result"), young people have to participate in mantaining keeping the house clean, as well as (might be better to say "along with") their parents do it.

It is true that teenagers spend many hours at school or practising extra activities such as extra school work, sports or learning music and, maybe, they do not have enough time to do the chores. Therefore (or you can say "Because of this,") , some people teenagers may think that they do should not have to participate in the household chores because it is an exclusive exclusively the parents' duty.

On the other hand, parents too also have a strict timetable schedule and they need help when they arrive at get home. It is not fair that, for example, that the mother of the family, who has her own job and responsibilities, does all the tasks at home.

From my point of view, household chores must be shared and teenagers must have specific tasks. For example, easy tasks like cleaning, hoovering or washing the dishes. And it has significant advantages for them, because it prepares them for the future and they helps them become more conscious  about the realities  of real life.


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Essay: Teenagers should share housework equally

Nowadays, almost every family has to share the housework because all the members of the family have their own responsabilities during the day. As a consequence, young people have to participate in keeping the house clean, as much as their parents do.

It is true that teenagers spend many hours at school or practicing extra activities such as extra school work, sports, music and, maybe, they do not have enough time to do chores. Therefore, some people may think that they do not have to participate in chores because it is an exclusive duty for parents.

On the other hand, parents too have a strict timetable and they need help when they arrive home. It is not fair that, for example, the mother of the family, who has her own job and responsabilities, also has to do all the tasks at home.

From my point of view, households must be shared and teenagers must have specific tasks. For example, easy tasks like cleaning, vacuuming or washing the dishes. And this would have significant advantages for them, because it would prepare them for the future and they would become more conscientious about real life.

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