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Today is 23th suptember.
Hi !! Thank you for lots of corrections and comment to yesterday entry. I was surprised. I can't write long sentence yet. But,I'll do my best :) anyway, I want to keep it.
By the way, a typhoon is coming in Japan. It's pouring. I hope the rain stop soon because the laundry has piled up this week :(
That's the end of today's entry!! Bye ♡
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The 2nd day〜（＾ω＾）
Today is the 23th suptember 23rd of September.Hi!! Thank you for lots all of the corrections and comments to yesterday's entry. I was surprised. I can't write long sentences yet. But I'll do my best :) Anyway, I want to keep at it.
By the way, a typhoon is coming in to Japan. It's pouring. I hope the rain stops soon because the laundry has been piled piling up this week :(
That's the end of today's entry!! Bye ♡
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The 2nd day〜（＾ω＾）
Today is the 23rd * 23th suptember of September.Hi !! Thank you for lots all of the corrections and comment to yesterday's entry. I was surprised. I can't write long sentences yet. But, I'll do my best :) anyway, I want to keep at it.**
By the way, a typhoon is coming in to Japan. It's pouring.*** I hope the rain stops soon because the laundry has piled up this week :(
That's the end of today's entry!! Bye ♡
* 序数 - We usually (in US) use ordinal numbers ("first" "second" "third" "fourth" etc.) for dates. So it was good, except 1, 2, and 3 have irregular endings. 23 is "Twenty-third" - so we abbreviate it "23rd." ("1st" "2nd" "3rd" "4th" "21st" "22nd" "23rd" etc. But be careful, because 11 is "eleventh," 12 is "twelfth" and 13 is "thirteenth")
** "Keep at it" is a really good expression. I think it's a perfect translation for 頑張ります. Is that what you wanted to say? To "keep at it" means to continue trying, to persevere (辛抱します？).
*** I think after "It's pouring" you should have an exclamation point (!). Don't use exclamation points in formal writing, but for casual writing like this, it would be fine.
I hope the weather improves. 今、日本に蒸し暑いですね？
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The 2nd day〜（＾ω＾）
Today is September 23rdHi !! Thank you for lots of corrections and comments on yesterday's entry. I was surprised. I can't write long sentence yet. But,I'll do my best :) anyway, I want to keep doing it (?)
By the way, a typhoon is coming in Japan. It's pouring. I hope the rain stops soon because the laundry has piled up this week :(
That's the end of today's entry!! Bye ♡
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