What do you think about traveling by motorcycle?
Motorcycles are one of the main transport in the Southeast Asian countries. It makes traffic becomes messy and chaotic, but it is really convenient, suitable for those who can’t buy a car. Because price’s car here very expensive, import taxes are often more than 2 or 3 times the value of a car For people who driving car in the developed country, maybe they see the use of motorcycle is quite dangerous.
But for me, I like to sit on a motorcycle than in a car. Motorcyclist brings for me the feeling of freedom, not being cover and look at everything through the glass windows.
Anyway, if you are tourist and go to the southeast Asian countries in one day, you will enjoy with the feeling of riding a motorbike. Many tourists say that it's a dangerous game. Haha. Riding so fast, feeling the wind turned into your face, riding on winding, rugged roads in the mountain area, the smell of incense on the path traversed. Especially the smell of newly planted rice when you go through the rural or suburb area. I love this smell so much.
I think my wording may be odd, so I hope you can help me about the wording to better understand it, sound more natural. Thank you a lot.
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What do you think about traveling by motorcycle?
Motorcycles are one of the main types of transport in the Southeast Asian countries. It makes traffic messy and chaotic but it is really convenient and suitable for those who can’t afford to buy a car. Because cars are very expensive here, import taxes are often more than 2 or 3 times the value of a car. People driving cars in a developed country might view motorcycles as being quite dangerous.But for me, I prefer to sit on a motorcycle rather than in a car. Motorcycles represent a feeling of freedom, not being inside and looking at everything through glass windows.
If you are tourist and go to the southeast Asian countries in one day, you can experience the feeling of riding a motorbike. Many tourists say that it's a dangerous game. Haha. Riding so fast and feeling the wind against your face; riding on winding, rugged roads in the mountain area, the scents alongside on the path. Especially the smell of newly planted rice when you go through a rural or suburban area. I love this smell so much.
Very well written. I changed where I thought the language is more natural or grammatically correct. I changed the word "incense" because this is something you would burn and not found in the natural environment. I would rather say: the sweet scent of flowers, etc. I also changed the word "traversed" because not really used in everyday language but it is correct.
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What do you think about traveling by motorcycle?
Motorcycles are is one of the main transports in the Southeast Asian countries. It makes traffic becomes messy and chaotic, but it is really convenient and suitable for those who can’t buy a car. Because price’s of car here is very expensive, import taxes are often more than 2 or 3 times the value of a car. For people who driving drive car in the developed country countries maybe they see the use of motorcycle is quite dangerous.But for me, I like to sit on a motorcycle than in a car. Motorcyclist brings for me the feeling of freedom, not being covered and looking at everything through the glass windows.
Anyway, if you are a tourist and go to the southeast Asian countries in one day, you will enjoy with the feeling of riding a motorbike. Many tourists say that it's a dangerous game. Haha. Riding so fast, feeling the wind turned hurling into your face, riding on winding, rugged roads in the mountain area, the smell of incense the wind on the path traversed. Especially the smell of newly planted rice when you go through the rural or suburb area. I love this smell so much.
I think my wording may be odd, so I hope you can help me about the wording to better understand it, sound more natural. Thank you a lot.
Note: As you started the second line with the pronoun 'it' indicating motorcycle, I think it would be better to use 'motorcycle' in the first line rather than 'motorcycles', which is a plural.
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