Awkward Arabic Word Phrasing?

I wasn't sure if by 'awkward' you meant that you want a correction 

for it to flow better, but I corrected it as I understood it and if you

meant to say: "Hi my colleagues. I'm studying Arabic because it's 

a beautiful language and the language of many of my friend's religion".

If this is what you wanted to say, then consider my correction to be right :)

I wish you good luck SirMars.

Awkward Arabic Word Phrasing?