Check my TOEFL writing practice please! Por favor :) Topic: If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? If I could change something of my hometown, would be the garbage dropped in the publics areas. In my Hometown in many corners, streets or even on parks are trash dropped. Many times the trash got there because someone threw it or the garbage truck didn’t pick it up. Whatever the reason, have garbage in a city is very unhealthy and ugly. The garbage dropped in the public areas are very harmful for the environment of the city and the entire world. This pollute the ecosystem and affect the biodiversity of my town. In addition, when some place have many trash this attracts rats, flies and cockroaches. These kind of animals and insects are very bad for the health of the citizens, because they bring with them many diseases. In my Hometown are neighborhoods that have a lot of trash in the street and the people there have got numerous diseases from rats as hepatitis, this deteriorate the quality of the live of the residents. In other neighborhoods have so much garbage that the whole place stinks. Another important reason to keep clean my Hometown is for their beauty. When your town has mountains of trash in the street looks very ugly and unhealthy. Is very important to pick up all the trash dropped in streets for improve the beauty of the city, in this way many people would have the desire to visit the city. If you live in a nice and clean city more people would like to live there and this could rise the price of the properties. In addiction many people have restaurants or places to hanging out in my hometown, so they need to have many clients in their stores to earn more money. With a clean, nice and safety place attract people to their business will be easier and will rise the income of the city. Finally, is very important to keep your hometown clean because the city looks better and the whole environment is benefited. People, animals and plants will have better conditions to develop in a clean habitat and the city will be attractive to more people for visiting.