Home sweet home: Finally back to Tunisia after a long year in Canada !
After succeeding in my first year at university and completing my internship during the summer, I couldn't be prouder and happier to get back home after a year full of perseverance, difficulties and happy moments as well.
In one year, I learned already a lot of things that strengthened my personality and improved my interpersonal and technical skills. Also, the university international environment enabled me to meet a lot of fantastic people from all over the world.
Returning home, happy and hoping for a full rest, still I would be fully available for teaching French on italki starting from next Thursday !
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Home sweet home: finally back in Tunisia after a long year in Canada!
After succeeding at in my first year at university and completing my internship over during the summer, I couldn't be prouder and happier to return get back home following after [...]a year full of perseverance, difficulties and happy moments as well. This does not make sense because the items you have listed are not compatible. 'Perseverance' is an attitude: when we are persevering, we are persisting despite difficulties. So it does not make sense to say the year was full of 'perseverence and difficulties'. Maybe something like: 'a year where I have had to persevere despite difficulties, though there have been many happy moments as well.' It makes more sense to use an adversive conjunction between 'difficulties' and 'happy moments' instead of 'and'.
In just one year, I have already learned already a lot of many things that have strengthened my personality and improved my interpersonal and technical skills. Also, the university international environment at university enabled me to meet a lot of fantastic people from all over the world. Not sure if 'international environment' is the right phrase: did you mean 'international community'?
Returning home, happy and hoping for a full rest, still I will would be fully available for teaching French on italki starting from next Thursday !
:)
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Well done.
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