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Making New Friends In different situations of our lifes we need to socialize with people who are around us. When is possible people try to choose their friends so is the first impression important for us? Or what are the features that we care about when trying to make a new friend? Dealing with people is not easy. Since human being has different behaviors it is difficult to predict how good or bad would our relation with other people be. That is why many people look carefully for their future friends, roomates and employees. However, it also depends on the age. Children usually do not care much about whether their friends are extrovert, rich or smart. However, teenagers and adults usually are not in the same boat. Both group of people try to find a good friend with who they can share their lifes. On the one hand, some teenagers start to think about whether their friends are like them or not. Having things in common like hobbies begin to matter when they want to make a new friend. On the other hand, youngest adults think about what social benefits they think they will probably get. That is the reason why many of them really care about appereance and behavior. To sum up, as we grow up we create our social circle. This is changing year after year and probably we end up with a few people that we consider our real friends.

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Making New Friends

In different situations of during our lives we need to socialize with people who are around us. When it is possible, people try to choose their friends so is the first impression important for to us? Or what are the features that we care about when trying to make a new friend?

Dealing with people is not easy. Since human beings have different behaviors it is difficult to predict how good or bad would our relationship with other people would be. That is why many people look carefully for their future friends, roommates and employees. However, it also depends on the age. Children usually do not care much about whether their friends are extroverted, rich or smart. However, teenagers and adults are usually are not in the same boat. Both group of people try to find a good friend with whom they can share their lives. On the one hand, some teenagers start to think about whether their friends are like them or not. Having things in common like hobbies begin to matter when they want to make a new friend. On the other hand, youngest adults think about what social benefits they think they will probably get. That is the reason why many of them really care about appearance and behavior.

To sum up, as we grow up we create our social circle. This is changing year after year and probably we end up with a few people that we consider our real friends.

Well written, interesting. Nice use of idiomatic expressions and great overall grammar as well as clarity. :)

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Making New Friends

In different situations of in our lives we need to socialize with people who are around us. When it is possible people try to choose their friends, so is the first impression important for us? Or what are the features that we care about when trying to make a new friend?

Dealing with people is not easy. Since human being has different behaviors it is difficult to predict how good or bad would our relationship with other people would be. That is why many people look carefully for their future friends, roommates and employees. However, it also depends on the age. Children usually do not care much about whether their friends are extroverted, rich or smart. However, teenagers and adults usually are not in the same boat. Both groups of people try to find a good friend with whom they can share their lives. On the one hand, some teenagers start to think about whether their friends are like them or not. Having things in common like hobbies begin to matter when they want to make a new friend. On the other hand, youngest adults think about what social benefits they think they will probably get. That is the reason why many of them really care about appearance and behavior.

To sum up, as we grow up we create our social circle. This is changing year after year and probably we end up with a few people that we consider our real friends.

Great job on this, you write very fluidly and naturally.  This was also a really interesting notebook entry, very enjoyable to read!

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