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Basketball I played basketball in gym where is near by my house. The gym is around 5minutes by foot. I enjoyed! I like basketball. When I was junior high school student , I was basketball player. But I am over 30yesrs old now. I was very tired .I just played only 20 minutes

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Basketball

I played basketball in a gym which is near by my house. It takes about 5 minutes on foot to get to the gym.
I enjoyed!

I like basketball. When I was a junior high school student , I was a basketball player.
But I am over 30 years old now. I was very tired. I just played only 20 minutes. (I feel like saying the last sentence as something like "I only played it for about 20 minutes" sounds kind of better)
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Basketball

I played basketball in *a* gym where which is near by my house. The gym is around 5minutes *away* by on foot.
I enjoyed *it*!

I like basketball. When I was *a* junior high school student , I was *a* basketball player.
But I am over 30 years old now. I was very tired .I just played only for 20 minutes
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Hi Hironori You could do with paying attention to what we call "articles." We have the definite article "the," and the indefinite article "a". These articles need to come before the noun at several points in your piece. Thanks Andrew

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