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Two Worlds (이 재미있는 이야기입니다) ^^ Two worlds ... It was August 1 like any other day, the wind blew the little cloud that wore the sun, she sat on the chair near the window, used to raise his eyes to the heavens when things were not clear to her, a world lies fact, a reality not clear, a sea of ​​feelings and a thousand cries silently stood and she always had all the universe. It was 9.35 am when one coconut palm tree plot of his neighbor adjoined his room and the small window with which you could admire this mysterious sky, the sound of cocazo awakened from his meditation, his thoughts came and went like the waves of the sea lashing her sanity, it was possible or not that awful feeling strange was taking over her womb? -Laurencia, Come to eat! I slurp Mom! ....Back to reality, eat, breathe, live, much work exhausted she thought, Hahaha Laurencia river after saying those words that instantly seemed corny and out of itself. Laurencia ran to the door of her room through her bed and a small table next to a mirror in which every day looked, it was curious that she had never seen herself, because every time I looked in his mirror looking at her cornered inside a thousand and one questions perhaps not existing yet answer. Thank you very much for your help and correction! I am available to help with your Spanish See you next time! Lina R.

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Lina, can be come a good writer because you are good at painting a story with words. Correction: What do you meaning when you use the word "slurp"?

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