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My mother I can´t image my life withot my parents, but especially my mother. She is a strong, worker and independent woman. My mother is the older sister and she had looked after his brothers. She has the responsability to bring the money to her house because my grandparents were sick. She always has a close relationship with her daughters. We are three girls in the family and she taught us to follow our dreams. Furthermore, she encourage me to study and be better person with her example. What is more I started to study English because of her, it was one day when she told me that English would be the best to my future studies. Actually, I would not be the person I am today without the influence of my mother. I am always give the best of me and I know she is proud of me

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My mother

I can´t image my life withot my parents, but especially my mother. She is a strong worker and an independent woman.
My mother is the older(oldest?) sister and she had to look after his her brothers. She has had the responsability to bring the money to her house because my grandparents were sick. (I would say: Because my grandparents were sick, she had to work to support the family.)
She always has had a close relationship with her daughters. We are There are three girls in the family and she taught us to follow our dreams.
Furthermore, she encouraged me to study and to be a  better person with(better: through) her example.
What is more I started to study English because of her. it was one day when She told me one day that English would be the best to for my future studies.
Actually, I would not be the person I am today without the influence of my mother. I am always give the my best to whatever I'm doing of me and I know she is proud of me.


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My mother

I can´t image my life without my parents, but especially without my mother. She is a hard worker and an independent woman.
My mother is the oldest among her siblings, and she had to look after his younger brothers. She has the was responsible for bringing the money home to her house , because my grandparents were too sick to work.
She always has always  been a close relationship with to all 3 of us,  her daughters. We  my 2 sisters and me,  are three girls in the family and she taught us to follow our dreams.
Furthermore, she encourage me to study hard and be a hard working person, with just like her. example.
What is more, I started to study English is also because of her. it was It happened one day when she told me that knowing English would be very useful for  be the best  my future studies.
Actually, I would not be the person I am today without the influence of my mother. I am always give try to give my the best to everything I do, and I know she is proud of me
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My mother

I can´t image my life without my parents, but especially my mother. She is a strong, worker and independent woman.
My mother is the olderoldest sister and so she had to looked after his her brothers. She has had the responsability to bring the money to her house because my grandparents were sick.
She always has a close relationship with her daughters. We  There are three girls in the my family and she taught teaches us to follow our dreams.
Furthermore, she encourages me to study and to  be a   better person with her example.
What is more I started to study English because of her, it was one day when she had  told me that English would be the best to for  my future studies.
Actually, I would not be the person I am today without the influence of my mother. I am always give the best of me  always do my best and I know she is proud of me

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