Frist Day
My friend Sarah recommend the italki to me.
when she tell me that I should write something in italki,
I feel shy.
because I never do it,
and I don't I should write something.
I come here,
I hope I can make more friends.
And I hope improve my English in order ot CET4.
:)It is good day.
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Frist First Day
My friend Sarah recommend the italki to me.When she tell told me that I should write something on italki,
I feel felt shy.
Because I've never done it,
and I don't I should write something. (I think you meant, "and I don't know what to write" here)
I'm come finally here and
I hope I can make more friends.
And I hope to improve my English in order ot to pass the CET4. (In English we rarely begin a sentence with "and" so make sure to avoid using it! :) )
:)It is was a good day.
You are certainly brave for writing all of this and although it may not be perfect you are certainly on your way to being a great English speaker! I hope what I corrected helps you improve and keep these notebook entries up! You can add me as a language partner if you have any questions, good luck!! -John K.
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