About university education
Educated in university is now an important step for students enter into society from school.A group of people consider it as a vital factor of job hunting ,however, it is also good for students to improve themselves and to make friends easily in the university.
The main function of university education is to teach students knowledge and working skills.Employer will know about you quickly through your resume which include the major you studied in and the performance that how you have done at university.For example , university students may have more chance working in Apple Inc than one who have not educated in university by employer’s first judgment.
But ability is also indispensable.There are many clubs in university,they can choose whatever they are interested.In clubs, they would learn how to cooperate with others and how to solve problems which would be important skills in their career lives.If someone always quarreled with each other and always have a blank mind,what is the value that he or she still stay in this position?Personal ability and sociability will help students get success in their careers.
In general ,university education can teach students vocational skills and help them realize how to behave in a social acceptable way.Not a signal one can be omitted,they will be growth in university education.
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About university education
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About university education
To be Educated in a university is now an important step for students entering into society from school.A group of people consider it as to be a vital factor of for job hunting ,however, it is also good for students to improve themselves and to make friends easily in the university.The main function of a university education is to teach students knowledge and working skills. An Employer will know about you quickly through your resume which includes the major you studied in and the performance that how you have done at the university.For example , university students may have more chance working in Apple Inc than one who have has not been educated in university by employer’s first judgment.
But ability is also indispensable.There are many clubs in university,they can choose whatever they are interested.In clubs, they would learn how to cooperate with others and how to solve problems which would be important skills in their career lives.If someone always quarreled with each other and always have had a blank mind,what is the value that he or she still stay in this position?Personal ability and sociability will help students get success in their careers.
In general ,university education can teach students vocational skills and help them realize how to behave in a socially acceptable way.Not a signal one that can be omitted,they there will be growth in university education.
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Sorry, I will correct the mistake immediately!Thank you for pointing out~
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You have done a great job, 罗 婧! You have written about an interesting topic, one that many American families consider.
To improve, I would suggest working on your punctuation. You know exactly where in a sentence to place commas and periods, but when you are typing always remember that the comma is placed directly after a word, and then there is a space before the next word. The same goes for periods.
Good luck in your English studies!
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