My New Classmates
I changed class this semester.In the begining,I was regret about that,because I was so miss my previous classmates,eapecially my best friend-Jeremy.Fortunately,I adapted gradually.My new calssmates very take care of me.They would make me happy,give me snakes,ask me if want to go to toilet together.In order to maintain previous classmates's emotion,I would have lunch with them.Although I tire of run back and forrth,but they all my sweetie,it is worth it.In this period,I appreciate Jeremy very much,when I am sad,painful,she support me unconditional.I was lucky for turn to this class,making me knew many funny classmates.If someone asked me:If you can choose join this new class or not,do you want it?My answer is:yes!
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My New classmates
I changed class this semester. In the beggining, I was regretted it about that, because I was so missing my previous classmates, especially my best friend-Jeremy. Fortunately,I adapted gradually. My new classmates very take very good care of me.They would make me happy, give me snacks and ask me if want to go to toilet together with them. In order to maintain a good relationship with my previous classmates to maintain previous classmates's emotion,I would have lunch with them. Although I tire of running back and forth, but they are all my sweeties and it is worth it. In this period, I appreciate Jeremy very much. When I am sad or in pain painful, she supports me unconditionally. I was lucky to change for turn to this class, because I met many new and funny knew funny classmates. If someone asked me: "If you can choose to join this new class or not ,do you want it?" My answer would be is:yes!Although and but-These two words perform the same function so it is incorrect to use them both in your sentence.
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My New Classmates
I changed class this semester. In the beginning, I was regretting this because I was missing my previous classmates, especially my best friend- 'Jeremy' .Fortunately, I adapted gradually. My new classmates took very good care of me.They would make me happy, give me snacks and ask me if I wanted to go to toilet with them. In order to maintain my previous classmates's emotion, I would have lunch with them. Although I tire of running back and forth, but they all my sweetie, it is worth it. In this period, I appreciate Jeremy very much. When I am sad or painful she would support me unconditionally. I was lucky to be in this class; making me many new, funny classmates. If someone asked me: "If you could choose to join this new class or not, would you want to?" My answer would be 'yes'!On the whole this write-up is VERY good, well done.
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