The importance of clean water
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Water is an extremely important factor in daily life. We use water for drinking, bathing and entertaining. Our bodies are 70% water so that we always have sufficient water supply for the body.
Water is a form of natural resources of each country. Countries with dense river system or ocean, it is a factor extremely advantage in economics and security. First, the economy: There is abundant water sources will be very rich seafood, traveling and besides hydropower is also an important role in the development of clean energy sources. Second, each country has abundant water resources so economic development will thus help ensure social security. An example, Vietnam is country which has a lot of river system. There for it is helpful for people in cool climate, moving and exporting sea food.
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The importance of clean water
Could you help me to correct this text ?Water is an extremely important factor in daily life. We use water for drinking, bathing and entertaining. Our bodies body are havs a 70% amount of water so that we always have sufficient water supply for the our body.
Water is a form of natural resources of (for) each country. Countries with a dense river system or ocean, it is have a factor that is extremely advantage (advantageous) in economics and security. First off, the economy: There is abundant water sources will be very rich seafood, travelling and besides, hydropower is also an important role in the development of clean energy sources. Second Secondly, each country has abundant water resources so economic development will thus help ensure social security. An example, Vietnam is a country which that has a lot of river systems. There for Therefore it is helpful for people to live in a cool climate, moving and exporting to export sea food.
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The importance of clean water
Could you help me to correct this text ?Water is an extremely important factor in daily life. We use water for drinking, bathing and entertaining. Our bodies are 70% water so that which ensures we always have sufficient water supply for the body to function.
Water is a form of natural resource s of for each country. Countries with a dense river system or ocean, have an it is a factor extremely advantage in economics and security. First, the economy: Tthere is abundant water sources will be very rich in seafood and be useful for traveling and besides hydropower is also plays an important role in the development of clean energy sources. Second, each country which has abundant water resources will have so economic development and will thus help ensure social security. An For example, Vietnam is country which has a large lot of river system. Therefore it is helpful for people in cooling the climate, as well as for moving and exporting sea food.
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The way you wrote -- though I can understand it to an extend - cannot be corrected to sound meaningful -- if I have to follow your choice of words. Any correction is just to correct your grammar or whatever, yet without any change to how wrongly they were expressed. It's okay( you are still learning the language) , but I am too tired to correct it now. ))
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