My first Letter to my "penfriend".
My name's Gilberto, and I'm from Brazil, I'm living in Itapeva, but I was living in Sorocaba.
I'm a procurement specialist, but now I'm unplowed, I'm loking for a job. I speak three
languages, Spanish, a little English and my native language the Portuguese. I'd like to learn
English because is important to my Job, and I'd like to speak with other people around the
word, just to know other cultures. I have a little family, my two sisters and my mom. My mom is a
hairdresser, and my sister Laurie is a housewife, and my sister Fabiana is a hairdresser too. My
sister Laurie is 38 years old and my sister Fabiana is 40 years old, and I'm 31 years old. I like reading
books and technology.
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Okay, I wasn't sure how to show markings of the changes that I made, but here is your text with the corrections:
My name is Gilberto, and I'm from Brazil. I'm living in Itapeva, but I am from Sorocaba.I'm a procurement specialist, but I'm currently unemployed and looking for a job. I speak three
languages: Spanish, a little English, and my native language is Portuguese. I'd like to learn
English because it is important for my job. Also, I'd like to be able to speak with other people around the
world to learn other cultures. I have a small family, just two sisters and my mom. My mom and my sister, Fabiana, are both hairdressers, and my sister Laurie is a housewife. Laurie is 38 years old, Fabiana is 40 years old, and I'm 31 years old. I like reading books and technology.
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