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Quito - Ecuador Today, I made my first flight to Ecuador. Quito was the destiny selected by the crew planners for me. Let me introduce miself: I'm Flight Attendant since a year ago in Avianca (the biggest airline in Colombia). During this year i just have made local flights, just a few international flights were assigned to me (Cancún, Curacao and Caracas). But step by step, more international flights are coming. I wish to travel to USA; Avianca have five destinations in North America: Washington, New York, Miami, Fort Lauderdale and Los Angeles. I hope the best experiences!

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Quito - Ecuador

Today, I made my first flight to Quito, Ecuador. Quito was the destiny selected by the crew planners for me.

Let me introduce myself: I've been a Flight Attendant for one year with Avianca (the biggest airline in Colombia).

During this year, I have made mostly local flights, and just a few international flights were assigned to me (Cancún, Curacao and Caracas). But step by step, more international flights are coming.

I want to travel to the USA; Avianca has five destinations in North America: Washington, New York, Miami, Fort Lauderdale and Los Angeles.

I hope for the best experiences!
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Quito - Ecuador

Today, I made had my first flight to Ecuador. Quito was the destiny selected by the crew planners for me. For my first destination, the crew planners selected Quito./ Quito was my first destination.

Let me introduce miself myself. I'm I have become a Flight Attendant  for Avianca since a year ago. in Avianca  Avianca is the biggest airline in Colombia.

During This year, I just have made mostly local flights and only  just a few international flights were assigned to me (Cancún, Curacao and Caracas). But I know that the more I work, the more international flights I will complete.

I wish  would like to travel to the USA. Avianca have has five destinations in North America: Washington, New York, Miami, Fort Lauderdale and Los Angeles.

I hope the best experiences! ??? What do you mean to say here?


Great Job Wilson

These are just a few corrections. In many cases there are endless possibilities of saying the same thing in different ways. I tried to add more flow to your writing and make it sound more natural in English. Let me know if you'd like to book any sessions with me . i also teach on here. 

Good luck with your learning!

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