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My Summer Vacation Today i want to share some interesting things with you. i am on my summer vacation . i can't live in my dormitory, because my dormitory has to close during the vacation . so i live in a youth hotel. the hotel has a big living room, and there are two bosses, one of them name jianjie, she is a very beautiful smart and humours woman , the another one is a man , he is also very humours and fun. last summer vacation , i lived there as a volunteer ( one way to travel, you can do something to get free food and free accommodation). but this year ,i lived there as a lodger. i can met many interesting people there, they come from differrent places, and thy have different aims to come here. i often chat with these people. because i can learn a lot from them. i can know much more funny things . and i also make friends with some of them . it's really interesing.

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My Summer Vacation

Today I want ("would like" is better) to share some interesting things with you. I am on my summer vacation and I can't live in my dormitory, because my dormitory has to closed during the vacation. So I live in a youth hotel. The hotel has a big living room, and there are two bosses, one of them name their names is Jianjie, she is a very beautiful smart and humours humorous woman. The another one is a man, and he is also very humours humorous and fun.
Last summer vacation, I lived there as a volunteer (a way to travel and get free food and accommodation)one way to travel,you can do something to get free food and free accommodation). However, this year, I lived there as a lodger. I can meet many interesting people there, that come from different places, and thy have different aims to come here reasons for visiting. I often chat with these people because I can learn a lot from them. I can know learn much more funny things, and i also make friends with some of them. It's really interesting. 


:) Enjoy the rest of your summer vacation! 

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My Summer Vacation

    Today I want to share some interesting things with you. I am on my summer vacation and I can't live in my dormitory because my dormitory has to it's closed during the vacation. So, I live in a youth hostel. The hostel has a big living room.  There are two bosses: one of them is named, Jianjie. She is a very beautiful, smart, and humours humorous woman. The an other one is a man named, _______. He is also very humours humorous and fun.
    Last summer vacation I lived there as a volunteer.  (One way to travel: you can do something to get free food and free accommodations.) But this year, I live there as a lodger. I can meet many interesting people there. They come from different places, and they have different aims to come here. I often chat with these people because I can learn a lot from them. I can know much many more funny things, and I also make become friends with some of them. It's really interesting.


Very good! I totally understood what you were saying. One tip, instead of saying, "they have different aims to come here" maybe say, "they have different goals for being here"

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