everyday life How was your day? Today I just wanna say about my everyday life. Everyday I am very tird because all of time busy. So I just wanna relax. Sometimes, I felt that I'm fed up with my daily

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everyday life How was your day? Today I just wanna say about my everyday life. Everyday I am very tird because all of time busy. So I just wanna relax. Sometimes, I felt that I'm fed up with my daily routine. Every morning I get up at the same time and ready for work and then leave home. All day long I work hard at office nevertheless you know, I like lunch time. I can eat very delicious food. The lunch menu is alway change day by day. And, after coming back home I have dinner and watch TV sitting on the chair. In the evening somtimes I study english and read book etc. It's the same everyday. I think i am just like a squirrel in a spining wheel. I need a chage. I am not sure yet what kind of chage could be nice.. Just I wish something exciting would happen. I would like to traverl all ove the country freely fight now. So I want to meet various people form other countries. But it's impossibel. Because already you know. I don't have much time in addition i have two cats. So I can't leave with my cats. They need to take care of me. So I thought how can I go tip or travel long time. Finally I guss I found that I have such a good idea. Frist, I will make boyfriend and then marriage. well.. my cats get a father. And I cant go enywhere with an easy mind. haha how do you think it. I know it's also impossibel.it was joke. Thank you for reading. Please~ Let me know If I made any mistakes please correct my mistakes. and you would add some sentence for more fluently

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everyday life

How was your day?
Today I just wanna talk about my everyday life.
Every day I am very tired because I'm busy all of the time.
So I just wanna relax.
Sometimes, I feel that I'm fed up with my daily routine.
Every morning I get up at the same time and get ready for work and then leave home.
All day long I work hard at office, however, you can guess, I like lunch time.
I can eat very delicious food.
The lunch menu is always changing day by day.
And, after coming back home, I have dinner and watch TV sitting in the chair.
In the evening somtimes I study english and read a book etc.
It's the same everyday.
I think i am just like a squirrel in a spinning wheel.
I need a change.
I am not sure yet what kind of change, but it could be nice..
I just wish something exciting would happen.
I would like to travel all over the country freely right now.
So I want to meet various people form other countries.
But it's impossible.
Because you already know. I don't have much time and plus, i have two cats.
So I can't leave with my cats.
They need me to take care of them.
So I thought how could I go on a trip or travel a long time.
Finally I guess I got such a good idea.
First, I will get boyfriend and then get married. well.. my cats get a father.
And I can go anywhere with an easy mind.
haha what do you think?
I know it's also impossible; it was joke.

Thank you for reading.
Please~
Let me know If I made any mistakes please correct my mistakes.
and you could add some sentences for more fluidity

everyday life

How was your day?
Today I just want to say something about my everyday life.
Everyday I am very tird tired because all of time busy I am busy all the time
So I just want to relax.
Sometimes, I felt that I'm fed up with my daily routine.
Every morning I get up at the same time and I get ready for work and then leave home.
All day long I work hard at office nevertheless you know, I like lunch time.
I can eat very delicious food.
The lunch menu is always changes day by day.
And, after coming back home I have dinner and watch TV sitting on the chair.
In the evening somtimes I study English and read books etc.
It's the same everyday.
I think I am just like a squirrel in a spining spinning wheel.
I need a change.
I am not sure yet what kind of change could be nice..
Just I wish something exciting would happen.
I would like to traverl all ove over the country freely right now.
So I want to meet various people form other countries.
But it's impossible.
Because you already know. I don't have much time in addition i have two cats.
So I can't leave with my cats.
They need me to take care of me them.
So I thought how can I go for a tip trip or travel for a long time.
Finally I guss guess I found that I have such a good idea.
Frist First, I will make get a boyfriend and then I will get married marriage. well.. my cats get a father.
And I cant can go enywhere anywhere with an easy mind.
haha how what do you think about it?
I know it's also impossibel.it was a joke.

Thank you for reading.
Please~
Let me know If I made any mistakes please correct my mistakes.
and you would add some sentences for more fluently fluency

("Fluently" is an adverb and it modifies the verb, but what you need in your sentence is a noun, and in this case it is "fluency") ;)

Hi Lani, I hope you'll find a way to see the world ;) I wish you all the best!

Comments: (I reached Italki's word limit, sorry)

"Sometimes, I feel that I'm fed up with my daily routine." - Instead of 'felt' use 'feel' because you still 'feel' this way now. The verb is present progressive

"You know, all day long I work hard at the office nevertheless you know, I like lunch time." - in this sentence, you don't really need 'you know'. Use 'you know' in the same way you use /잖아요/.

Usually Hamster's run in those spinning balls, squirrels live in trees

"They need to take care of me" - are you being funny? ㅋㅋ So your cat's look after you? The sentence is correct.

Finally I guess (optional /realised) I found that I had such a good idea. - This sentence can be made more natural = "Finally i came up with a great idea"

First, I will get make boyfriend and then get married - you cannot 'make' a boyfriend. You can 'get' a boyfriend or meet someone who will become your boyfriend.

"how do you think it" = I know what you mean, in Korean 어떻게 생각하죠? means "what do think?" in English.

i hope this helps, if you have any questions, please feel free to ask :)

It's the same everyday.
I think i am just like a Hamster in a spinning wheel.
I need a change.
I am not sure yet what kind of change could be nice..
Just, I wish something exciting would happen.
I would like to travel all over the country freely right now.
So I want to meet various people from other countries. (optional /I want to meet many different people, from different countries)
But it's impossible.

Because already you know (optional /you should know by now/) I don't have much time, in addition i have two cats.

So I can't leave with my cats.
They need to take care of me.
So I thought how can I go for a trip or travel for a long time.
Finally I guess (optional /realised) ~~I found that~~ I had such a good idea.
First, I will get ~~make~~ boyfriend and then get married. well.. my cats get a father.
And I can't go anywhere with an easy mind.
hahaWhat do you think?
I know it's also impossible. it was just a joke (optional /i was only kidding/).

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