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Lyrics for my favorite song ① Today,I'm writing about lyrics for my favorite song. The title is "Christmas song". It's sung by Japanese band they're called "back number ". The song was released on November 2015. I know this is unseasonable, but I like the song and l want to learn how to say this lyrics in English. I'm writing in Japanese after in English. That is too long,so this is only a part. Would you correct my writing? ------------------------ I'm thinking everyday that I want to see you And I want you to notice that And I'm looking for you from a crowd passing each other Oh such a day (=Christmas day)probably you are laughing with someone else So,in the centre of my chest get tight ----------------------- 会いたいと毎日思ってて それを君に知って欲しくて すれ違う人混みに君を探している こんな日は他の誰かと笑ってるかな 胸の奥の奥が苦しくなる

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Lyrics for my favorite song ①

Today,I'm writing about the lyrics for of my favorite song.
The title is "Christmas song".
It's sung by Japanese band. They're called "back number ".
The song was released on November 2015.
I know this is unseasonable isn't the right season, but I like the song and l want to learn how to say this the lyrics in English.
I'm writing them in Japanese after in the English.
That The song is too long,so this is only a part.
Would you correct my writing?
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I'm thinking everyday that I want to see you I think everyday about seeing you
And I want you to notice that
And I'm looking for you from a crowd passing each other by
Oh such a day (=Christmas day)probably you are you're probably laughing with someone else
So in the centre of my chest gets tight
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会いたいと毎日思ってて
それを君に知って欲しくて
すれ違う人混みに君を探している
こんな日は他の誰かと笑ってるかな
胸の奥の奥が苦しくなる


Your English is good! I just made some changes to make the English lyrics sound more natural.

I'm listening to the song on Youtube now and I really like it :)

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