Lyrics for my favorite song ①
Today,I'm writing about lyrics for my favorite song.
The title is "Christmas song".
It's sung by Japanese band they're called "back number ".
The song was released on November 2015.
I know this is unseasonable, but I like the song and l want to learn how to say this lyrics in English.
I'm writing in Japanese after in English.
That is too long,so this is only a part.
Would you correct my writing?
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I'm thinking everyday that I want to see you
And I want you to notice that
And I'm looking for you from a crowd passing each other
Oh such a day (=Christmas day)probably you are laughing with someone else
So,in the centre of my chest get tight
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会いたいと毎日思ってて
それを君に知って欲しくて
すれ違う人混みに君を探している
こんな日は他の誰かと笑ってるかな
胸の奥の奥が苦しくなる
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Lyrics for my favorite song ①
Today,I'm writing about the lyrics for of my favorite song.The title is "Christmas song".
It's sung by Japanese band. They're called "back number ".
The song was released on November 2015.
I know this is unseasonable isn't the right season, but I like the song and l want to learn how to say this the lyrics in English.
I'm writing them in Japanese after in the English.
That The song is too long,so this is only a part.
Would you correct my writing?
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I'm thinking everyday that I want to see you I think everyday about seeing you
And I want you to notice that
And I'm looking for you from a crowd passing each other by
Oh such a day (=Christmas day)probably you are you're probably laughing with someone else
So in the centre of my chest gets tight
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会いたいと毎日思ってて
それを君に知って欲しくて
すれ違う人混みに君を探している
こんな日は他の誰かと笑ってるかな
胸の奥の奥が苦しくなる
Your English is good! I just made some changes to make the English lyrics sound more natural.
I'm listening to the song on Youtube now and I really like it :)
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