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Why we have ice-cream? Why we have ice-cream? If there is something that we like to have in Summer, it's an ice cream. That mix of water, milk and sugar has a long history. It couldn't be otherwise, the first ice-cream appeared in China 4,000 years ago. It was considered a delicatessen, it was made of a kind of rice paste, spices, and milk mix with snow. Later, the fruit ice-cream appeared, and then in the XIII century, the ice-cream truck could be found in the streets. But not only in China, snow was used to prepare these refreshing cocktails: Throughout The Middle East you could tried ice mixed with fruit sweetened with honey or sugar. We even found a reference about ice-cream in the book of Proverbs: 'Like cold snow during harvest time is a faithful messenger for those ones who send him, he refreshes the spirit of his master' Throughout The Middle East, the 'Sharbat' was drunk, a cold drink made by fruit and flower petals popularized by Mongolian Emperors

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Why do we have ice-cream?

Why do we have ice-cream?
If there is something that we like to have in the summer, it's an ice cream. That mix of water, milk and sugar has a long history. It couldn't be otherwise, the first ice-cream appeared in China 4,000 years ago. It was considered a delicatessen delicasy. It was made of a kind of rice paste, spices, and milk mix with snow.
Later, the fruit ice-cream appeared, and then in the XIII century, the ice-cream truck could be found in the streets. But not only in China, was snow was used to prepare these refreshing cocktails: Throughout The Middle East you could have tried(or: tasted) ice mixed with fruit sweetened with honey or sugar. We even found a reference about ice-cream in the book of Proverbs: 'Like cold snow during harvest time is a faithful messenger for those ones who send him, he refreshes the spirit of his master'
Throughout the Middle East, the 'Sharbat' was drunk, a cold drink made by fruit and flower petals popularized by Mongolian Emperors


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Why we have ice cream?

Why we have ice cream?
If there is anything that we like to have in summer, it's ice cream. The mix of water, milk and sugar has a long history. The first ice cream appeared in China 4,000 years ago. It was considered a delicatessen, it was made of a kind of rice paste, spices, and milk mixed with snow.
Later, the fruit ice cream appeared, and then in the XIII century, the ice cream truck could be found on the streets. But China wasn't the only place that used snow to prepare these refreshing cocktails: it was also used in the Middle East where you could try ice mixed with fruit sweetened with honey or sugar. We even found a reference about ice cream in the book of Proverbs: 'Like cold snow during harvest time is a faithful messenger for those ones who send him, he refreshes the spirit of his master'
Throughout The Middle East, the 'Sharbat' was drunk, a cold drink made by fruit and flower petals that was popularized by Mongolian Emperors.
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Why do we have ice cream?

Why do we have ice cream?
If there is anything that we like to have during summer (no need to capitalize the "S"), it's an ice cream. That mix of water, milk and sugar has a long history.* It couldn't be otherwise,  the first ice-cream was invented in China 4,000 years ago. * It was considered a delicacy, it was made from a kind of rice paste, spices, and milk mixed with snow.
Later, the fruit ice cream appeared, and then in the XIII century, the ice cream truck could be found in the streets. But China wasn't the only place that used snow to prepare these refreshing cocktails: Throughout The Middle East you could try ice mixed with fruit sweetened with honey or sugar. We even found a reference about ice cream in the book of Proverbs: 'Like cold snow during harvest time is a faithful messenger for those ones who send him, he refreshes the spirit of his master'
Throughout The Middle East, the 'Sharbat', was drunk a cold drink made by fruit and flower petals, was popularized by Mongolian Emperors


*You could just say "The first ice cream was invented in China, 4000 years ago."

**It's "ice cream" not "ice-cream"

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