My third time to swim in this summer holiday
A boy with wet hair is typing his notebook entry in his laptop. Yeah, the boy is me, i just came home. Before that, I was swimming in a swimming pool of our neighborhood. In fact, I am not always swim. Moreover, I have had the fun in this swim.
When I floated on the water, tension and fatigue were eliminated. How cozy it is!
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My third time to swimming in during this summer holiday
A boy with wet hair is typing his notebook entry in/on his laptop. Yeah, the boy is me, I just came home. Before that, I was swimming in a swimming pool of our neighborhood. our neighborhood swimming pool (Just the word order). In fact, I am I do not always swim. Moreover, I have had the fun in this swim. However, I have had a lot of fun swimming this summer.When I floated on the water, tension and fatigue were eliminated/faded away. How cozy it is!
Great work! I would just say overall you have great grammar but you just need to work on word order a bit :) Keep it up!! -John
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