Topic exam 14
This is a part of a letter you recieve from an English friend.
"We might have a school trip to your country next year What do you think is the best time of year to visit? What are the most interesting things for teenagers to do in your area?"
Answer:
Dear Joe
Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you. I can´t believe you are going to visit my country!
In my opinion, summer it’s the best time to visit Spain because you can enjoy in their incredible beaches at the south or practice different sports like swimming, surfing or boating. Besides, there are many festivals and parties around my area where the teenagers can have fun in their holidays That’s a good plan, don`t believe it?. If you prefer a cultural trip, don´t forget to visit the Prado museum at the capital, Madrid or the Sagrada Familia in Barcelona.
I hope that my point of view will help you in your choise. Write soon
All the best,
José Carlos
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Topic exam 14
This is a part of a letter you recieve from an English friend."We might have a school trip to your country next year What do you think is the best time of year to visit? What are the most interesting things for teenagers to do in your area?"
Answer:
Dear Joe,
Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you. I can´t believe you are going to visit my country!
In my opinion, summer it’s the best time to visit Spain because you can enjoy in their incredible beaches at the south or practice different sports like swimming, surfing or boating. Besides, there are many festivals and parties around my area where the teenagers can have fun in their holidays That’s a good plan, don`t believe it?. If you prefer a cultural trip, don´t forget to visit the Prado museum at the capital, Madrid or the Sagrada Familia in Barcelona.
I hope that my point of view will help you in your choise. Write soon
All the best,
José Carlos
use "is" instead of "it's". "It's" means "it is".
you could say "in the southern area" or "in the south" or even leave it out altogether
this word makes sense here, but I think if someone is on vacation you would say you can "play" different sports, not "practice" That's too much work haha
You could say "Also" or "Besides that" or "In addition to that" or start the sentence like "There are also many festivals..."
"on vacation" would be more appropriate
"don't you think?" or to sound more natural, you could just say "That sounds like a good plan, doesn't it?" or "That sounds like a good plan, right?"
"choice" not "choise"
Hope the colors aren't too confusing! Good job, I can understand everything, there are just minor errors. Good luck!
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