The first day of a new week

Today is the first day of a new week. It was raining in the early morning so it is as cool as Autumn. I hope this weather can keeps going.
I went to out this morning and went to a place that have never been to before.
Recently I have a new feeling that Beijing is really big. This feeling is from that day of the self-driving tour with my friends. That was a really interesting journey/trip.

Hello Yutong,

A nice text, I take it you don't like hot weather! Just a few small corrections but I could understand everything.

'Go' is usually followed by 'to' in all forms apart from a few special phrases. 'Go out' is one of them like 'go home' and go on holiday'

'Travel' is a verb and in the last sentence you need a noun so 'journey' or 'trip' is better.

Best wishes

Bob

The first day of a new week

Today is the first day of a new week. It was rain raining in the early morning so it is as cool as autumn. I hope this weather can keep going.
I went out this morning and went to a place that I had never been before.
Recently I have a new feeling that Beijing is really big. This feeling is from that day of self-driving tour with my friends. That is was a really interesting travel trip.

The first day of a new week

Today is the first day of a new week. It was raining in the early morning so it is as cool as Autumn-do you mean spring-. I hope this weather can keep going.
I went  outside this morning and went to a place where I have never been before.
Recently I have a new feeling that Beijing is really big. This feeling started from that day i went for self-driving tour with my friends. That is a really interesting travel.