My daughter
Today I want to talk something about my daughter, who is two years and three months. Her voice sounds very beautiful, and she always use wrong words. For example, when I reached home after work, she run to me, and said tomorrow I played with a little freind and I spoke to her fristly.
I certainly know what's she want to express, she want to say today instead of tomorrow, but she hasn't still learn how to say untill now. just like my poor English. She want to tell me she won't like the Gorilla, he don't speak to others initiatively.(The Gorilla is in a book " I have friendship to rent")
HaHa, she speak good or not, I love her forever.
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My Daughter
Today I want to talk something about my daughter, who is two years and three months. Her voice sounds very beautiful, and she always use wrong words. For example, when I reached reach home after work, she run to me, and said says tomorrow I played with a little freind friend and I spoke to her fristly firstly.I certainly know what's what she want wants to express, she want wants to say today instead of tomorrow, but she hasn't still learn yet learned how to say untill until now. just like my poor English. She want wants to tell me she won't like the Gorilla, he don't speak to others initiatively.(The Gorilla is in a book " I have friendship to rent")
HaHa, whether she speaks good or not, I love her forever.
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My daughter
Today I want to talk something about my daughter, who is two years and three months. Her voice sounds very beautiful, and she always uses the wrong words. For example, when I reached home after work, she run ran to me, and said tomorrow I played with a little freind and I spoke to her firstly (I'm not sure what word you're trying to use).I certainly know what's she wants to express, she wants to say today instead of tomorrow, but she hasn't still still hasn't learned how to say untill now. just like my poor English. She wants to tell me she won't like the Gorilla, he don't doesn't speak to others initiatively.(The Gorilla is in a book " I have friendship to rent")
HaHa, whether she speaks good or not, I love her forever.
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I love babies specially girls, I read your writing and try to imagine ^^ I think your daughter is so cute :-* god bless her
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Yes, your vocubulary is great, But also need to pay attention to your grammer.
1、She always use/ uses...
2、she ran to me, I think should be the past.
3、I certainly know what's she wanted to say, Past tense.
4、She wanted to tell me she wouldn't like the Gorilla, He doesn't....
5、she speaks......
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Thanks, but what's the meaning of " to polish it "?
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