Sherlock and Watson's shoes(part1)
In the stories of Sherlock Holmes, Conan Doyle made Watson as a narrator of the adventures which they gumbled with each other.So,now I will write the conversation that occured between Sherlock and Watson about his shoes.
"Turkish,Watson?"asked Sherlock Holmes,looking at my shoes.
"No,they aren't,they are english,of course!" I answered."I have bought them here in London, from Latimer shop in Oxford street."
Holmes smiled.
"I wasn't talking about your shoes,Watson,"he said."I was talking about the bath!you have had a turkish bath,haven't you?"
"Yes,I did!but how did you know Holmes?!"
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Sherlock and Watson's shoes (part 1)
In the his stories (or, writings) of about Sherlock Holmes, (Sir Arthur) Conan Doyle made Watson as a the narrator of their adventures, which and many times they grumbled verbally sparred with each other.So (omit comma) now I will write (or, record) the a conversation that (or, which) occurred (or, transpired, took place) between Sherlock and Watson about (or, regarding) his shoes.
"Turkish, Watson?" asked Sherlock Holmes, looking at my shoes.
"No, they aren't, they are English, of course!" I answered. "I have bought them here in London, from Latimer shop in on Oxford street."
Holmes smiled.
"I wasn't talking about your shoes, Watson," he said. "I was talking about the bath! You have had a Turkish bath, haven't you?"
"Yes, I did have! But how did you know, Holmes?!"
Note: This made me smile. Write more like it!
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