Father's day
Today is your day, dad!
Thank you for everything, I'm grateful to you for all your help in all the moments of my life until now.
I want celebrate this day and offer to you love, care and acknowledgment I would like to reward a litlle of everything that you do for me.
We love you!
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Father's day
Today is your day, dad!Thank you for everything, I'm grateful to you for all your help in all the moments of my life until now.
I want celebrate this day and offer you my love offer to you love, care and acknowledgment. I would like to repay reward a little of everything that you have done do for me.
We love you!
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Father's day
Today is your day, dad!Thank you for everything, I'm grateful to you for all your help in all the moments of my life until now.
I want to celebrate this day and offer to you love, care and acknowledgment I would like to reward you for a little of everything that you do for me.
We love you!
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Father's day
Today is your day, dad!Thank you for everything, I'm grateful to you for all your help in all the moments of my life until now. (until now implies an end to me. Did something change that you are now ungrateful?)
I want celebrate this day and offer to you love, care and acknowledgment I would like to reward a litlle of everything that you do for me.
We love you!
It is not incorrect but why say it?
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Thanks, Gary!
In your opinion does the text is okay?
Have a good day, my friend!
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'grateful to you' is fine. I don't know why those guys have suggested it isn't.
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