personal statement
PART 3
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During this period, I learned how to manage all the work schedules to sort out the best shuttle schedule and how to work as a translator in intercultural communication between Chinese staff and American manager. Because of this first line job, I got the chance to communicate with the customers, hoping to find out their attitudes toward this supermarket. “I drove down Highway 17 and went through Walmart, Kroger, T-mall to stop in your store. Publix means so much to me, rather than a store”, the sentence of a customer who was from Florida emblazoned in my mind, which illustrates the spectacular balance between create customer delight and capture value from them. After I came back from the US, I realized that compared with the big big world, what I have learned is just a drop in a bucket. I stared to plan my graduate scheme. From then on, I work even harder to achieve higher score to meet the conditions of my aiming college. Looked back these three years college life, I grow up as an individual. I overcame my biggest obstacle, Gloss phobia, fear of public speaking. I practiced days and nights, I even volunteer to do speeches in the class, which I got more chance to practice. It is a real hard time. I can still remember a scene of my first time speech, sweating, trembling and being still of tongue. But I never gave up, I started from little change, reading out loud the speech draft over and over, trying to memorize all the words, using cue card and so on. As time goes by, my unremitting endeavor finally paid off. In the second year, I made a successful speech in press conference as a representative of university student. I am looking forward being a part of a university where I can develop myself both personally and academically. I believe that my potential will be confirmed by a university which supports students fully. THX, for all your suggestion!
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personal statement
PART 3PART1 https://www.italki.com/notebook/3290726/entry/718033
PART2 https://www.italki.com/entry/718034
During this period, I learned how to manage all the work schedules, to sort out the best shuttle schedule(I recommend saying 'timetables' as you have already used the word 'schedule) and how to work as a translator in intercultural communication between Chinese staff and American manager ("how to act as a liaison between Chinese staff and American managers, focusing on translating and bridging cultural differences."). Because of this first line (hands-on) job, I got the chance (opportunity) to communicate with customers, hoping to find out ("more about") their attitudes toward this supermarket. “I drove down Highway 17 and went through Walmart, Kroger, T-mall to stop in your store. Publix means so much to me, rather than just "a store." The sentence of a customer who was from Florida emblazoned in my mind ("Caught my attention" is better to use here." Also, what did the customer say?), which illustrates the spectacular balance between create ("creating") customer delight (satisfaction) and capture ("prioritizing")value from them. After I came back from the US, I realized that compared with the big big world, what I have learned is just a drop in a bucket. I stared to plan my graduate scheme. From then on, I worked even harder to achieve higher scores to meet the conditions of my aiming college ("College entrance requirements). Looked ("Looking back on.") these three years (of) college life, I grow (grew) up as an individual. I overcame my biggest obstacle, Gloss phobia, fear of public speaking. I practiced days and nights, I even volunteer to do speeches in the class, which I got more chance to practice ("Which gave me a fantastic opportunity to practice." . It is a real hard time (It was a really difficult time). I can still remember a scene of my first time speech, sweating, trembling and being still of tongue ("speechless"). But I never gave up, I started from little change (I started by making small changes), reading out loud the speech draft ("reading the draft speech aloud) over and over, trying to memorize all the words, using cue cards and so on. As time goes by, my unremitting endeavor finally paid off. In second year, I made a successful speech in a press conference as a representative of university students. I am looking forward being a part of a university where I can develop myself both personally and academically. I believe that my potential will be confirmed by a university which wholeheartedly supports its students.
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