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Please correct my note Today, I got up at 8 AM. When I woke up, my husband had already cooked breakfast and he was waiting me. He made a pancake, yogurt and coffee. I like coffee he make it. I changed my cloths and made up. Then, we went to a garden park. Some people were playing the Pokemon. Also I did. My husband doesn't play the Pokemon, so he often asks me that I have to walk looking forward. After about 1 hour, we went to a restaurant for lunch. I ate tomato sandwiches come with couscous. I had never eaten couscous. It was good. There was a bakery in this restaurant. I got some bread for breakfast of tomorrow, but we ate them all while we were getting back our home. Because they were so delicious. I was supposed to get more bread. Today was my normal holiday.

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Please correct my note

Today, I got up at 8 AM. When I woke up, my husband had already cooked breakfast and he was waiting me. He made a pancakes, yogurt and coffee. I like the coffee he made.
I changed my clothes and made up What did you made up?. Then, we went to a garden park.
Some people were playing the Pokemon. I was also playing the game. My husband doesn't play the Pokemon, so he often asks me that I have to walk looking to the front.
After. About 1 hour after our walk, we went to a restaurant for lunch. I ate tomato sandwiches come with couscous.
I had never eaten couscous. It was good. There was a bakery in this restaurant. I got some bread for breakfast of for tomorrow, but we ate them all while we were getting back our home because they were so delicious. I was supposed to get more bread (but I did not)
Today was my a normal holiday.
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Today, I got up at 8 AM. When I woke up, my husband had already cooked breakfast and he was waiting for me. He made a pancake, yogurt and coffee (you cant make yogurt). I like the coffee he make it (I liked the coffee he made).
I changed my cloths and made up (I changed my clothes and got ready). Then, we went to a garden park (Then we went to a park).
Some people were playing the Pokemon (Some people were playing the pokemon).  Also I did (I played it too). My husband doesn't play the Pokemon, so he often asks me that I have to walk looking forward (My husband does not play pokemon, and he often ask me to stop playing the game and concentrate on the road while waking).
After about 1 hour, we went to a restaurant for lunch. I ate tomato sandwiches come with couscous (I ate tomate sandwiches which came wih causcous).
I had never eaten couscous. It was good. There was a bakery in this restaurant. I got some bread for breakfast of (For) tomorrow, but we ate them all while we were getting back (for) our home. Because they were so delicious. I was supposed to get more bread.
Today was my normal holiday.

WELL YOU USED TOO MANY SIMPLE SENTENCES. It is definitely good for a start, but these sentences could have been written in complex sentences. 


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