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Please check this for me! I will be very gratefull!!!!!!!!! Topic: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live I think nowadays people have many options for prepare food easier than many years ago and that have improve the way people live. In the past, if you want to cook you needed wood or carbon to provide of energy your kitchen, whereas in the present, you can introduce an instant soup y your microwave with water and with 3 minutes there the food is ready. This change in people life is very important and became from the science and technology improvements that modify ours cooking equipment, the techniques to prepare food and the kind of food that everybody eat today. Many years ago, for example in the time of my grandparents around the year 1960 they only could cook with fire, hence they need to search those materials that produce it such as wood or carbon. The search and obtaining of those materials took many worktime and effort. Currently you find kitchens that works even with solar energy and you do not have to spend a lot of work looking for solar energy because it is almost everywhere. In addition, in the present, you can buy some instant food that only require to be heated in a bowl or microwave to be ready for consume. For example, nuggets, soups or pastas. In the past, if you wanted to eat a nugget you should kill a chicken first and prepare the nuggets from zero. Currently you can prepare juice easier than in the past, because you only have to go to the store to buy some little package of juice in powder. In 1920s, you should take the fruit from the tree, peel it and prepare it. Even for cook food today, you do not need to take cooking classes or much preparation because it is very simple. Those changes in people live related to the preparation of the food made that nowadays the food is more unhealthy than some years ago, therefore today the people suffer more diseases produced for the constant consumption of those easy prepare and fast food that we eat today. In the past all the food prepared in ours grandparent's home was homemade and healthy, while now the food that people prepare easily are produced in factories, with a low quality of the products and with many chemicals components that affect the people live a could create cancer. Furthermore, today are more people diagnosed with cancer than twenty or thirty years ago.

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Please check this for me! I will be very gratefull!!!!!!!!!

Topic: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live

I think Nowadays people have many options to prepare food easier than many years ago. That hasand that have improved the way people live. In the past, if you wanted to cook you needed wood or carbon to provide of energy for your kitchen. whereas in the present, Now, you can introduce an  put instant soup y  in your microwave with water and with 3 minutes there the food is ready. your food is ready within three minutes. This change in people life lives is very important. and became from the science and tech improvements that modify ours cooking equipment, the techniques to prepare food and the kind of food that everybody eat today.  Science and technology have improved our cooking equipment and the way we prepare the food that we eat today. Many years ago, for example in the time of my grandparents

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Please check this for me! I will be very gratefull!!!!!!!!!

Topic: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live

I think nowadays people have many options for prepare food easier than many years ago and that have improve the way people live. In the past, if you want to cook you needed wood or carbon to provide of energy your kitchen, whereas in the present, you can introduce an instant soup y your microwave with water and with 3 minutes there the food is ready. This change in people life is very important and became from the science and technology improvements that modify ours cooking equipment, the techniques to prepare food and the kind of food that everybody eat today.

Many years ago, for example in the time of my grandparents around the year 1960 they only could cook with fire, hence they need to search those materials that produce it such as wood or carbon. The search and obtaining of those materials took many worktime and effort. Currently you find kitchens that works even with solar energy and you do not have to spend a lot of work looking for solar energy because it is almost everywhere. In addition, in the present, you can buy some instant food that only require to be heated in a bowl or microwave to be ready for consume. For example, nuggets, soups or pastas. In the past, if you wanted to eat a nugget you should kill a chicken first and prepare the nuggets from zero. Currently you can prepare juice easier than in the past, because you only have to go to the store to buy some little package of juice in powder. In 1920s, you should take the fruit from the tree, peel it and prepare it. Even for cook food today, you do not need to take cooking classes or much preparation because it is very simple.

Those changes in people live related to the preparation of the food made that nowadays the food is more unhealthy than some years ago, therefore today the people suffer more diseases produced for the constant consumption of those easy prepare and fast food that we eat today. In the past all the food prepared in ours grandparent's home was homemade and healthy, while now the food that people prepare easily are produced in factories, with a low quality of the products and with many chemicals components that affect the people live a could create cancer. Furthermore, today are more people diagnosed with cancer than twenty or thirty years ago.

Many years ago, around 1960, my grandparents only could cook with fire.  They needed to search for materials such as wood or carbon.  This took a lot of time and effort.  Now you find kitchens that work on solar energy so you don't have to spend a lot of time searching for wood or carbon.  Solar energy is almost  everywhere!  Presently, your can buy some instant food that only needs to be heated in a bowl or microwave to be ready to eat. Some examples are nugget, soups and pastas.  In the past if you wanted to eat a nugget you had to kill a chicken first and then prepare the nuggets from scratch.  Now, juice is easier to prepare because you only have to go to the store to buy some little package of juice in powder.  In the 1920's you had to take the fruit from the tree, peel it and prepare it.  Today you don't need to take cooking lessons.  It is very simple. 

The food that we eat today is not as healthy as in the past.  People are suffering more diseases because of the constant consumption of easy to prepare foods.  Our grandparents made food that was homemade and healthy.  Today, it is produced in factories that use low quality ingredients and cancer causing chemicals.  Furthermore, more people are diagnosed with cancer than twenty or thirty years ago.

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