Two men and the sky
Before I loved someone, I thought there is not the deference of "love" that a man give me.
One day when I walked with a man, I saw the blue sky and clouds like beautiful carpets. And I said to him "Look! Isn't it beautiful?" But he didn't say anything and just kept walking.
Next day I asked him why he didn't say anything at that time. He answered "Because I didn't feel that was beautiful. Just a normal sky." I couldn't understood what he was talking about and said "It is not important if the sky was actually beautiful. The point is I felt the sky that I saw at next to you was beautiful. Isn't it special?" He seemed not to be able to understand what I said.
After that I suddenly remembered another man. When I said something was beautiful(I forgot what that was), He told me one sentence he like:
"The beautiful stuff is your heart that feel beautiful stuff beautiful."
「美しいものを美しいと感じるあなたのこころが美しい」
I still often remember him when I think about "love".
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Two men and the sky
Before I loved someone, I thought there is not the deference of no difference between the "love" that a man men give me.One day when I walked with a man, I saw the blue sky and clouds like beautiful carpets. And I said to him "Look! Isn't it beautiful?" But he didn't say anything and just kept walking.
Next day I asked him why he didn't say anything at that time. He answered "Because I didn't feel that was beautiful. Just a normal sky." I couldn't understood understand what he was talking about and said "It is not important if the sky was actually beautiful. The point is I felt the sky that I saw at next to you was beautiful. Isn't it special?" He seemed not to be able to understand what I said.
After that I suddenly remembered another man. When I said something was beautiful(I forgot what that was), He told me one sentence he like:
"The beautiful stuff is your heart that feel beautiful stuff beautiful."
「美しいものを美しいと感じるあなたのこころが美しい」-I don't understand this sentence, but your English translation doesn't really make sense.
I still often remember him when I think about "love".
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Two men and the sky
Before I loved someone, I thought there was no difference in the "love" that the men have shown me.
One day when I walked with a man, I saw the blue sky and clouds like a beautiful carpet.. I said to him "Look! Isn't it beautiful?" But he didn't say anything and just kept walking.
Next day I asked him why he didn't respond at that time. He answered "Because I didn't feel that was beautiful. Just a normal sky." I couldn't understood what he was talking about and said "It is not important whether the sky was actually beautiful. The point is that I felt the sky was beautiful just because you were next to me. Isn't it special?" He seemed not to be able to understand what I said.
After that I suddenly remembered another man. When I said something was beautiful (I forgot what that was), he responded: "The beautiful stuff is the beauty in your heart that makes everything beautiful."
「美しいものを美しいと感じるあなたのこころが美しい」
I still often remember him when I think about "love".
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Two men and the sky
Before I loved someone, I thought there is not the deference of no difference between "love" that a man men give me.One day when I walked with a man, I saw the blue sky and clouds like beautiful carpets. And I said to him "Look! Isn't it beautiful?" But he didn't say anything and just kept walking.
Next day I asked him why he didn't say anything at that time. He answered "Because I didn't feel that was beautiful. (It was) Just a normal sky." I couldn't understood understand what he was talking about and said "It is not important if the sky was actually beautiful. The point is I felt the sky that I saw at next to you was beautiful. Isn't it special?" He seemed not to be able to understand what I said.
After that I suddenly remembered another man. When I said something was beautiful(I forgot what that was), He told me one sentence he like:
"The beautiful stuff is your heart that feel beautiful stuff beautiful."
"The way you feel about beauty is beautiful to me."
「美しいものを美しいと感じるあなたのこころが美しい」
I still often remember him when I think about "love".
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