The only thing we have to fear on this planet is man
Our planet is the only place for people to live, so apparently, we need to take care of it. But unfortunately, people usually don`t do it. Smog almost blanket the cities and a great amount of greenhouse gases and exhaust fuels are produced by factories, plants and cars.
We are lucky to have a big amount of natural resources but It is believed that sooner or later the natural resources of our planet will be depleted.
There are a lot of rubbish in our country. Our landfill sites are filled and you can see this rubbish dumped in the streets. We don`t have any bottle banks. Our streets are filled with plastic bags and I think, it would be much better if we began to use biodegradable packaging.
In my region we are in short supply of water because we don`t have so many lakes and rivers. Moreover, our rivers are contaminated by sewage or plant`s byproducts.
To conclude, I want to say that our government should look up for a solution how to save or natural habitat and people should become more environmentally friendly.
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The only thing we have to fear on this planet is man
Our planet is the only place for people to live soSmog almost blanket*s* the cities and a great amount of greenhouse gases and exhaust fuels are produced by factories, plants and cars.
We are lucky to have a big amount of natural resources but It is believed that sooner or later the natural resources of our planet will be depleted. *a simpler way to say this is to simply say "run out," instead of "be depleted," but the way you have written this is perfectly correct.*
There are is a lot of rubbish in our country. Our landfill sites are filled and you can see this rubbish dumped in the streets. We don`t have any bottle banks. Our streets are filled with plastic bags and I think it would be much better if we began to use biodegradable packaging.
In my region we are in short supply of water because we don`t have so many lakes and rivers. Moreover, our rivers are contaminated by sewage or plant`s by-products.
To conclude, I want to say that our government should look up for a solution *as to* how to save o*u*r natural habitat and people should become more environmentally friendly.
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The only thing we have to fear on this planet is man.
Our planet is the only place where people can live. So, obviously we have to take care of it. But, unfortunately, people usually don`t do that. Smog blankets most of our cities, and a huge/great amount of greenhouse gases, namely exhaust gas, are still been produced by our factories, plants, and cars.We are lucky to have a huge amount of various natural resources, but (It is believed that sooner or later) these natural resources (of our planet) will be depleted sooner of later.
There are a lot of rubbish in my country. Our landfill sites are filled to the brim, and you can see excess rubbish dumped in the streets. We don`t have any bottle banks. Our streets are filled with plastic bags, and I think it would be much better if we began to use biodegradable packaging.
In my region, we are often
To conclude, I want to say that our government should look
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