I like sports
One of my favorites hobbies in my life is practice of sports , I have practice football soccer , box, basketball and cyclism .
I have felt a lot of benefits to my health and make friends through sport . Therefore it has given greats satisfactions in my experience practicing each one of them and I will keep practicing them.
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I like sports.
One of my favorites hobbies in my life is practice of playing sports. I have practice play football, soccer, box, basketball, I box, and cyclism I cycle (or ride bikes).I have felt feel there are a lot of health benefits to my health and I have made make friends through sports . Therefore it has given greats satisfactions in my experience practicing each one of them and I will keep practicing them. <-- I would say, "Each sport is a lot of fun and I will keep playing all of them" or combine this sentence with the previous one (example below).
Great job, Alfredo! Most of what I noticed was just verb tense, which is probably the most difficult part of learning English. You'll rarely find the word, "therefore" in common conversation. It is best used in formal essays or speech. Based on the context of your entry, I would replace "therefore" with the word, "so."
EX: I feel there are a lot of health benefits and I have made friends through sports, so I will keep practicing them.
When learning a new language, it's best to start learning the things that you love. Whatever you talk about most is the first thing you should know in any language. Good luck!
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I like sports
One of my favorites hobbies in my life is practice of sports , I have practiced football soccer , boxing, basketball and cyclism .I have felt a lot of benefits to my health and make friends through sports . Therefore it has given greats satisfactions in my experience practicing each one of them and I will keep practicing them.
Good work! Just a few corrections that are more important than others:
"in my life" is not necessary. Its not wrong, but not needed.
is "practicing sports" or "the practice of sports." but what you said is clear.
"Boxing" and "Cycling" are the names of the sports in English. When used as a verb you box and bike.
I have felt... and made... both in the past tense.
Good work! You're making a great start in English. I love that photograph too! Wow!
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