Few sentences

The first factor that matters to me in search of a job is a company where an employee can build a career.
The second factor is that I'd like to become a valuable specialist in purchasing.
To maintain the supplies for the diamond mines, the procurement has to be planned very accurately.
Presently this task is accomplished with IT solutions.
But when I worked on my diploma project I aquired a very clear understanding of how significant a supply chain (a purchasing agent) is for a company.

Few sentences

The first factor that matter to me in search of a job is a company where an employee can build a career.
On the a second step I'd like to become a great valuable specialist in purchasing.
To maintain the supply of the diamond t mines the procurement have to be planned very accurately.
Nowadays  Nowdays this task is solved by IT solutions.
But when I worked on my diploma project I acquired aquire a very clear understanding about how significant  the supply chain is for a company.