Harry Potter
I've just watched the Harry Potter movie series again after a quite long time since I've been so unoccupied lately. Although I've already known how the story's gonna happen, I still felt extremely thrilled and excited as if I'm one of Hogwarts' students who are trying their best to fight against the dark side. Besides I realize that the more times I watch the movie, the more attention I pay to small details such as characters' face expressions, gestures and their inner feelings. This makes me feel so much more empathy and affection for a lot of characters.
It's such a miracle, isn't it? How come a woman in the world could ever "discover" a separated and perfect world that no one can ever find a hole in her imagination, and brought us such amazing people that I can't help adoring?
For me, wizarding world is a real, lively civilization that has existed for like several billion years and has billions of mystery that even J. K. Rowling has no idea about them; and that world, as well as Hogwarts and all wizards and witches is having its own daily life as we Muggles are.
Although I'm already 17 now, I would still be ready to pack my luggage for school like a 11-year-old kid if I received a letter from Hogwarts :D
Potterheads let's make friends :D
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Harry Potter
I've just watched the Harry Potter movie series again after a quite long time since , as I've been so unoccupied busy lately. Although I've already known how the story's gonna (informal) happen, I still felt extremely thrilled and excited as if I'm one of Hogwarts' students who are trying their best to fight against the dark side. Besides, I realize that the more times I watch the movie, the more attention I pay to small details such as characters' face facial expressions, gestures and their inner feelings. This makes me feel so much more empathy and affection for a lot of characters.It's such a miracle an amazing thing, isn't it? How come a woman in the our world could ever "discover" a separated completely different and perfect world that no one can ever find a hole in her imagination, and brought us such amazing people that I can't help adoring?
For me, the wizarding world is a real, lively civilization that has existed for like several billion years and has billions of mystery countless that even J. K. Rowling has no idea about them.; and that Their world, as well as Hogwarts and all wizards and witches, is having its own daily life as we Muggles are.
Although I'm already 17 now, I would still be ready to pack my luggage for school like an 11-year-old kid if I received a letter from Hogwarts :D
Potterheads let's make friends :D
Hi Quynh,
Well done. I can sense your passion for this world within these pages. This seems to have been written in spoken English because it's a bit informal for a writing assignment. Words like "gonna" and "like" are more for informal speaking.
Overall, good job. Just a few things to work on:
- vocabulary
- keep working on natural-sounding expressions
Thank you and keep up the good work!
Jesse
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Harry Potter
I've just watched the Harry Potter movie series again after a quite a long time since I've been so unoccupied lately. Although I've already known how the story's gonna happen play out, I still felt extremely thrilled and excited as if I'm one of Hogwarts' students who are trying their best to fight against the dark side. Besides, I realize that the more times I watch the movie, the more attention I pay to small details such as characters' face facial expressions, gestures and their inner feelings. This makes me feel so much more empathy and affection for a lot of the characters.It's such a miracle, isn't it? How come a woman in the world could ever "discover" such a separated and perfect world that no one can could ever find a hole in her imagination,. and She brought us such amazing people that I can't help but adore adoring?.
For me, the wizarding world is a real, lively civilization that has existed for, like, several billion years and has billions of mystery mysteries that even J. K. Rowling has no idea about them; and that world, as well as Hogwarts and all wizards and witches is having its own daily life just as we Muggles are.
Although I'm already 17 now, I would still be ready to pack my luggage for school like an 11-year-old kid if I received a letter from Hogwarts :D
Potterheads let's make friends :D
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@Minh Triet: Yeah the graphic design is quite simple comparing to the movies but what I'm interested in is that you can go anywhere and cast any spell you want like a real wizard :D If I knew about this game 1 month sooner, I would definitely try it out. But school is about to start so you know... :)) Just to keep myself focused.
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I played at about 10 years ago, the graphic quality is not so great now but at that time it was one of the best and the most important thing is it does not cost too much on your computer's memory.
You can watch the gameplay here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=32iUn60Woq4
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@Minh Triet: Really??? I've never heard about such video games before. Sounds interesting. Is it possible to play online on PC or we have to buy a CD or sth?
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