My best friend-Jeremy
When I first met her in first grade in high school,I though she was so beautiful girl.I begun try to talk to her,then I discovered she was so kindness!Graudually,we were familiar with each other.We have anything to say,like emotion,friends secret!To date,I am so thank that me to meet this friend.
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My best friend-Jeremy
When I first met her in the first grade in of high school, I though thought she was so such a beautiful girl. I begun try to began to talk to her, then I discovered she was very kind so kindness! Graudually, Gradually, we were familiar with each other. We have anything to say,like emotion,friends secret! We are able to say anything to each other, like share our emotions or tell each other secrets! To date, I am so thankful that me to meet this friend.I hope I kept the meaning of your story. Remember to add a space after each period or comma before the next word. =)
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My best friend-Jeremy
When I first met her in the first grade in high school,I thought she was so beautiful a girl.I begun to try to talk to her,then I discovered she was so kindnesskind!Graudually,we were familiar with each other.We have anythingeverything to say,like emotion,friends'secrets!To date,I am so thankful that me to meet this friend.0
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