The friendship between my best friend and me 1
When I was 12 years old,I became a student in junior high school. My best friend is my classmate in junior high school. I met her in 2010 and we became good friends soon later. We had been deskmates for nearly three years. I felt lucky. We were so closely that we did all the things together,studying,playing and etc. We had many common hobbies,just like reading. We even liked the same writers,such as Zhang Ailing,San mao and Han han. However,we first quarrelled with each other in 2012. At that autumn,we hardly ever talked with each and we quarrelled when talking. One or two years later,not until I saw the journal she wrote on QQ did I understood her feeling at that time. I felt very sorry. At the Spring Festival of 2013,she called me and we had a conversation about our arguemeet. She said that she wanted to be my good friends. She didn't want to argue with me like before. She cried. I was moved by her and realized that I was wrong. We became reconciled and were on good terms again.
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The friendship between my best friend and me 1
When I was 12 years old,I became a student in junior high school. My best friend was my classmate in junior high school. I met her in 2010 and we soon became good friends soon later. We had been deskmates for nearly three years. I felt lucky. We were so closely that we did everything together — studying,playing and etc. We had many common hobbies, just like reading. We even liked the same writers, such as Zhang Ailing, San mao and Han han. However,we first quarrelled with each other in 2012. That autumn,we hardly ever talked with each other and we quarrelled when talking. It was not until I saw the journal she wrote on QQ that I understood her feelings at that time. I felt very sorry. At the Spring Festival of 2013,she called me and we had a conversation about our argument. She said that she wanted to be my good friends. She didn't want to argue with me like before. She cried. I was moved by her and realized that I was wrong. We became reconciled/or you could say "we made up" and were on good terms again.This is really good. The mistakes are not big mistakes. Well done :-)
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The friendship between my best friend and me 1
When I was 12 years old,I became a student in junior high school. My best friend is my classmate in junior high school. I met her in 2010 and we became good friends soon later. We had been deskmates for nearly three years. I felt lucky. We were so close that we did everything together, studying, playing, etc. We had many common hobbies, just like reading. We even liked the same writers, such as Zhang Ailing, San mao and Han han. However, we first quarrelled with each other in 2012. That autumn, we hardly ever talked with each other and we quarrelled when talking. One or two years later, until I saw the journal she wrote on QQ did I understand her feelings. I felt very sorry. At the Spring Festival of 2013, she called me and we had a conversation about our argument. She said that she wanted to be my good friend. She didn't want to argue with me like before. She cried. I was moved by her and realized that I was wrong. We reconciled and we're on good terms again.Good job!
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