Do you like work out?
How are you doing this week?
And how was your class yesterday?
Was great?
I was so..so.and busy.
I just worked at office all day noting special.
But, after work I did work out nowadays.
I went swimming on Monday and Wednesday night.
Because I am getting fater.
So I work out to lose weight these days, not to make a fat( or so as not to be fat/lest I should get fat.)
You work out nowadays right?
I remember that you told me.
Why do you work out?
For lose weight or for health?
I like exercise and swimming and sometimes I ride a bike.
And I also like to be wet of sweat when I am doing it.
So I love summer than wintter.
How about you?
thank you for reading.
Let me know If I made any mistakes please correct my mistakes.
And you would add some sentence for more fluently
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Do you like to work out?
How are you doing this week?And how was your class yesterday?
Was it great?
It was so..so and busy. // It was alright but it was busy (more natural, 'so-so' is good, you can also say 'alright')
I just worked at the office all day nothing special.
But, nowadays after work, I do work out.
I went swimming on Monday and Wednesday night.
Because I am getting fatter. // I have put on a bit of weight lately (This is another way of saying the same sentence)
So I work out to lose weight these days, so i don't get fat // So it doesn't happen again (get fat)
You work out nowadays right?
I remember that you told me.
Why do you work out?
To lose weight or for your health?
I like exercise and swimming and sometimes I ride a bike.
And I also like to be dripping of sweat when I am doing it. (dripping of sweat = correct expression)
So I love summer more than wintter.
How about you?
Really good job :)
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